Inkitt
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Lynne

"Very good story I had suspicions from the start about the doctor and I was right also the mistress of the house.just enjoyed reading a good story."

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Good Gothic

"Enjoyed this. Writer has a good feel for building suspense, and manages to convey a lot of emotion without a great deal of dialogue. Would have liked a little more fleshing out of characters, physical descriptions help me visualize. Conflicted about the ending, since it does leave a large question mark, but it’s complete without answering it, and that may have been deliberate. "

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Mr. Adorable

"Great one there"

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