The Broken Bond - Severed Mates
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The Broken Bond - Severed Mates

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Story Notes

What you’re walking into: a female Alpha who clawed her way to a throne no woman had held in generations, a fallen prince with something ancient sleeping in his blood, a bond that has to be rebuilt from ash, and a High Council that would rather see them both dead than reunited.

If you love fated mates, the severed-bond ache, a second chance that has to be earned the hard way, and a multi-species world where witches, dragons, vampires, and the Fae all have a stake in two people finding their way back to each other, you’re in the right place.

A note on process: AI tools were used in support of this book, specifically to help keep my grammar on track, to develop character and world-building sheets, help me format dialog, and to stress-test the plot for holes. The story, characters, and writing are my own.

Thank you for reading. Comments and votes mean the world to a serialized author, and I read every one.

Summary

Twenty years ago, the Moon Goddess gave Violette a fated mate. Three months later, her own father tore the bond out of her chest. She has spent two decades believing the lie she was handed: that Marcx, the Lycan prince she loved at eighteen, begged to be severed so he could claim his throne without her. She buried the grief, hardened, and became the first female Alpha her pack had seen in generations. Now, on the exact anniversary of the night they were ripped apart, Marcx drags himself back to the cottage where it happened, half-shifted and dying of silver poison in the mud at her feet. The instant their eyes meet, the dead bond detonates back to life. Second chances were never meant to cost this much.

Status
Complete
Chapters
101
Rating
3.5 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

The Ghost of My Fated Mate

~~ Violette ~~

The floorboards of the cottage still smelled of dried cedar and old copper.

I ran my bare fingers over the heavy oak table in the center of the main room. Beneath a thin layer of gray dust, the wood was scarred with deep, jagged grooves.

They weren't from a blade.

They were the physical remnants of a ritual that had torn my soul in half exactly twenty years ago.

This place was my secret shame. As the reigning Alpha of the Moonbeam Pack, I should have burned it to the ground the moment I ascended. I should have ordered a pack bulldozer to clear the clearing and erase the memories.

Instead, I had spent hundreds of thousands in pack funds to fortify its cloaking wards, routing the perimeter magic to hide it completely from my own sentries.

I protected it out of a pathetic, closely guarded nostalgia. It was a hidden monument to a lost love, a shrine to a ghost I could neither bury nor forget.

I closed my eyes, breathing in the damp, stagnant air. Beneath my boots, I felt the faint, rhythmic thrumming of the earth.

The ley line beneath the foundation was a sleeping giant. I remembered the last time it had awakened - the raw power my father had drawn from it. A fated mate bond wasn't something you could cut with a simple spell; it was a cosmic decree. He'd used the very earth against us, shattering the cords that tied my soul to another.

A sudden, violent tremor shook the cottage walls, rattling the copper pots hanging above the hearth.

My body came awake all at once, Alpha instincts already running ahead of conscious thought, every muscle primed before I'd drawn my first breath.

The perimeter wards didn't just ripple - they shattered with the sound of breaking glass.

I moved before my conscious mind could process the threat. My hand dropped to my right thigh, fingers wrapping around the heavy leather hilt of my dagger.

It wasn't steel. Pure silver. The weight of it felt like the weight of my authority - the Alpha's right to be an executioner. The metal was a death sentence for any rogue who dared test my borders. A tool for moments exactly like this.

Stepping cautiously onto the covered porch, I squinted into the grey gloom. The freezing rain hissed as it struck the porch steps, turning the surrounding mud into a slick, treacherous soup.

Through the cracked, overgrown treeline, a massive silhouette burst forward.

It was a midnight-black wolf, monstrous in scale, easily twice the size of any beta or enforcer in my pack.

But it wasn't attacking.

It didn't boundary-hop with the graceful agility of a hunting predator. It plowed through the dense briars like a falling meteor - heavy, uncoordinated, and desperate.

The wolf dragged its hind legs, leaving a thick, terrifying trail across the pristine patches of snow.

The wind shifted and the scent hit me before I could think, sharp and sudden enough to stop me mid-step.

It wasn't normal blood. It was black, oxidized, and smelled heavily of sulfur and scorched iron - the unmistakable calling card of High Council executioners.

The silver-laced wounds tearing across the beast's flanks were actively weeping, resisting any natural Lycan regeneration.

"Stand down," I commanded.

I let my Alpha aura coat the air, a heavy, oppressive pressure meant to force submission from any encroaching intruder.

The black wolf didn't challenge me. It didn't bare its teeth or let out a defensive snarl. Instead, it let out a low, wet wheeze, its front legs buckling beneath its immense weight.

The massive head slammed into the frozen mud right at the base of my porch steps.

The beast began to violently convulse.

The sound of the transformation was visceral. Bones snapped like dry tree roots in a winter storm, popping and resetting in an unnatural, chaotic rhythm.

I took a slow step back, the dagger's grip biting into my palm where I'd forgotten to loosen my hold.

The black fur receded in irregular patches, melting away to reveal pale, blood-slicked human skin beneath. The man rolled onto his back, his chest heaving as he gasped for air his lungs couldn't seem to hold.

I froze.

The silver dagger slipped from my fingers, clattering uselessly against the wooden porch steps before rolling into the mud.

The sharp, aristocratic jawline. The broad, heavily scarred shoulders. The face that had haunted every single one of my dreams - and nightmares - since I was a teenager.

"Marcx?"

The name tore from my throat, raw, breathless, and fractured.

Twenty years of manufactured hate crumbled in a single, ragged breath. My father’s voice echoed in my head - the cold letters, the signed documents, his clinical explanation. *He wants the throne without you.* For two decades, I had believed it. I had watched him from afar, nursing the phantom pain of his choice. Then, a year ago, he’d vanished. The world assumed him dead, and I had let myself believe it, too. But the man gasping in the mud wasn't a king who had traded my soul for power.

His eyelids fluttered open.

His irises weren't their natural amber; they were a fractured, blown-out silver, poisoned by the weapons that had hunted him.

The moment his gaze locked onto mine, the dormant, mutilated fated mate bond snapped back into place.

It wasn't a beautiful, warm reunion. It was a violent, agonizing reconnection.

The ley line beneath the cabin surged upward through the floorboards like a current finding the shortest path between two points - and we were those points. The severed ends of the bond didn't ease back together. They snapped, the way a broken bone resets: one brutal moment of wrongness, then a new and terrible alignment.

Marcx let out a choked groan, his fingers clawing blindly at the frozen earth.

"Violette..." he whispered.

His voice was a raspy, broken thing, laced with absolute agony. He didn't look like an ambitious prince who had traded me away for a crown. He looked like a man who had been dragged through the lowest circles of hell.

I stared down at his shattered form, and the story my father had told - so neat, so perfect - began to fray. My father, the master strategist. An Alpha who secured his legacy at any cost. This broken man didn't fit that narrative. The thought was a splinter of ice in my gut: what if the choice was never his?

And if he had been out there alive and hunted all this time - not dead, never dead, only vanished - then what else had I been made to believe?

Before I could scream at him, before I could demand the answers to twenty years of torment, his eyes rolled back into his head.

His body went rigid. The shifting process stalled entirely, trapped in a horrific limbo.

His hands remained elongated into brutal, curved claws, and his chest stayed partially covered in coarse black fur, suspended in a lethal, half-shifted state.

"No, no, no," I panicked, dropping to my knees in the mud.

I grabbed his freezing shoulders and shook him. "Marcx, finish the shift! Look at me!"

He was completely unresponsive. Stuck. The one state every shifter feared, a volatile limbo that always ended in madness.

He was drowning in the dark, and I was the only one left who could pull him out.

~~ Author’s Note ~~

Hello, readers! Thank you so much for diving into the first chapter of my first fiction book, The Broken Bond: Severed Mates.

I am incredibly excited to share this world with you. To give you some peace of mind: I have finished plotting this entire book and have the world-building, lore, and character arcs fully mapped out. You’re in safe hands, and I’m committed to bringing this story to its conclusion for you.

That said, I am still new to navigating Inkitt's community and tools! I would absolutely love your help as I get settled in and swapping my story to showcase POV. If you have any favorite writing groups, forums, or specific (reddit) communities where fellow writers hang out and share tips, please leave me a note here or on my profile. I’d love to connect with like-minded authors and learn how to make this story the best it can possibly be.

Thank you for joining me on this journey!

✨vG✨ Victorine Grimshaw

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sandra
sandra

Note, English is not my first language. Going straight to the moment the lead meets her fated mate. Kinda feels like a poor choice. She did not get a good presentation or look into her life before they ran into each other. It took away more then building up.
So not a good start, sorry.

16 days

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