What is your opinion?
Thrilled
"If anyone's looking for a story they could read in one go and be thrilled during the ride, this is the one. The tension just built and built and there was beautiful realism included in the supernatural. There were a few mistakes, but the grammar was generally supreme and the story had a quick and flowing pace. I'd like to point the few mistakes out though. You wrote, "I know Grandma Rose gives all these weird things for you on your birthdays." and this is not really a mistake as such, but I believe it'd be better as, "I know Grandma Rose gives all these weird things to you on your birthdays." "A mirror that falls of a wall or breaks or cracks under mysterious circumstances are said to be haunted." The "are" should be "is." "suspected their daughter of an illicit affair that she vehemently denied, but her parents wont believe her." The "won't" should be "wouldn't." "at which point you entered and was never able to get out again," in which "was" should be "were." Also, you always use this: "***" as page breaks. Inkitt asks for the special page break to be used. I hope this was helpful. However, once again, this was a fantastic read. Well done!"
Magar2019M
"I thought it was a unique story. The details that were used in the story made it very interesting. Once I started reading it, I did not want to stop until I finished it. I would have preferred the ending to be different, but I'm definitely not a writer. Well done!"
