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Loved it, but not really a complete story

"So it was really good and really steamy. And getting really interesting... and then all of a sudden, it said epilogue. It's skipped a whole bunch of drama that should have been there. And just ended. So I loved it, but I wish it was actually a whole book."

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Good..but

"I really loved most of it but there's still the friend and wife who did him dirty. I would have like some confrontation, maybe a punch or two, evidence of the proof, you know what I mean.😁"

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It needs so much work

"First the names changes constantly. From Sean to Mike. In the beginning her eyes are green then they are brown her hair was blonde then it’s brown. It completely skips so much of what you need to know.you don’t get to see them even be together or get engaged. What the hell happened to the cheating ass wife and Sean? It’s just to much wrong with it . "

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