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Brilliant reading

"Throughly enjoyed reading the 3 chapters. Excellent writing style and the story flowed seamlessly. Had me in tears a few times especially at the end. Got lost in all the names but that really didn't matter as the main characters were easily identified. Would highly recommend reading these chapters."

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Lovely

"Such a lovely ending. I enjoyed all of this story. Will look for more stories by this author. "

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yes, i recommend

"really liked the story, though I wonder why it was separated in 3x 10 chapters instead of 1x 30 chapters.. but oh well, small detail. anyway, the build-up, storyline, the ideas are great, thanks :) will keep author on my radar ❤ "

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