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Cal and Janis

"Loved the story please give us more . Love to know how all of this turns out for the couple.🥰🥰😍"

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Promising!

"I was looking for a little spicy smut. This isn't quite that... for a quick romp, is surprisingly chaste (still spicy, but maybe 2 or 3 out of 5 on the pepper scale) but don't let that blind you to some very hot moments. BUT, I found myself actually interested in Janis, Cal and Brynn... far more than you'd expect for a short little sex tale. All the way to where issues around safe sex and sane behavior actually interfered with the heat for me. That's not a criticism, it's the realization that there are the bones of an incredibly hot novel here if Lana wants to build on it! "

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