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💜💜💜💜💜

"This was amazing! I was crying my eyes out which to me is a sign of good writing. ✍️ "

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Needs something More

"This story was good. I love that the female character isn't this broke, unemployed, desperate female needing to be rescued from life. Most of the story on all these platforms, put women in roles of being fools, uneducated or just not being able to survive life. Then it skips to 5 years. That's where I got a little lost. The jump doesn't fit with the female characters intelligence and awareness. But in the end good job."

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Spannend bis zum Knall

"Die Spannung wächst mit jedem Kapitel und dann der Knall. Etwas zu kurz, man erwartet eigentlich was großes. Bin aber doch gespannt darauf was Ariana machen wird."

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