Inkitt
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Love it

"I can’t wait to have more chapters."

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Wow, I’m obsessed!

"I love this erotic, romantic, fantasy book. The scenes are beautifully painted. The sex scenes are delicious. I love the characters, the welcoming parents, the many protectors for Alessia. This book is well-written and I haven’t found a grammatical error. Each chapter leaves me wanting more! Please don’t stop writing."

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Very interesting 🤨

"Oh please please please 🙏 I need more! Talk about a cliff hanger 😩 Is there more chapters or another book? I could shake him, he tells her others will try to come between them, cause trouble etc ... he should listen to himself "

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Lovable and intresting story

"I give this story a high rating because of how well you made the characters. It is very interesting to me and I never found myself bored while reading it. At certain points I found myself laughing along. The characters are very likeable and the story and plot is believable. Every once in a while I would see a grammar issue but it was not anything that really hurt my understanding. I usually don't enjoy books that have alpha/beta,etc but you had those further inspire your story and make it better rather than just rely on them. "

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Alessia

"Interesting "

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