Inkitt
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You’re gonna want to read this!

"This book is incredible! Danger, intrigue, betrayal, redemption, love, and soooo much delicious spice. Do yourself a favor and read it already!"

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The Unholy

"Great story! Each character is unique and ultimately builds to One. I'm saving this to my favourites!"

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Süchtig nach den nächsten Kapiteln

"Es wird von Kapitel zu Kapitel immer spannender. Ein Schock nach dem anderen, dass ist sehr gut geschrieben. 5 Männer die Brüder waren/sind und beweisen was Loyalität bedeutet, auch wenn man es selber kaum verstehen kann. Bin gespannt auf das Ende, ich kann mir nicht mal vorstellen was noch alles passieren kann."

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The Unholy

"Firstly, this is the first book I have read by this author and may I say - Wow! Well done Eden Quinn, I will be reading everything you have on Inkitt and I just love your writing style 👏🩷👏 Also for me, I loved that the chapters were long & that there were 86 of them. It made you feel like you were reading a proper book, rather than a short story. This book was exquisite and had you at the first chapter, by chapter 10 I couldn’t put it down. The plot with all its twists, the characters & setting were fantastic and the writing was always engaging, intense & funny. It’s a complex, sometimes violent & filthy story & chapters 68 & 69 blew my mind, I will be rereading them for weeks 😈🥵😈 I love all 5 men in very different ways however Xander for me, is the best 💙 I hope there is a book 2 and they do go on that holiday, that would be magnificent - Highly recommend reading 👌"

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This

"Book is so exquisite that I was tempted to quit my job so I would have time to finish reading it! So worth the nights of slapping my face with my phone as I nodded off. Loved it <3 #teamDominic2026!"

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Awesome story

"Yet another fantastic story by the amazing Miss Eden👏👏👏 Your writing is outstanding👌💯♥️Your characters are always so engaging and this story had more twists and turns than a roller coaster with ADHD😂 Intense, hilarious, beautifully saucy with the perfect balance of karma.👏👌🔥🫦♥️ I think this story could be made into an awesome movie! No holds barred on all smut levels though! Love your work and thank you yet again for another fantastic read🤩🤩🤩♥️♥️♥️"

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The unholy

"This was really good. The story and concept are solid...a couple places the build up didn't match the event, but it moved quick enough that it didn't linger as disappointment - jus an opportunity for rewrites. 😉 Also I was a little bummed we didn't get a whole group scene with everyone playing. 🔥"

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Hoping there’s a sequel 😈

"This book is an emotional rollercoaster that slips under your skin and refuses to leave. It’s an easy, natural read that hides a razor-sharp edge beneath its smooth cadence. You’ll swallow the first 10 chapters in a single, breathless sitting, completely unaware of how deep you’re sinking into the quicksand of the narrative. Beneath the beautiful language lies a vicious, multi-level plot that feels genuinely dangerous. Every chapter peels back a new layer of psychological torment and emotional intrigue. Just when you think you have mapped out the mystery, the story drops a massive twist forcing you to question your subconscious preconceived conclusions. It keeps you on the absolute edge of your seat, heart hammering against your ribs. It balances agonizing emotional stakes with a romantic tension that is profoundly intense. The chemistry between the characters is raw and consuming, serving as a desperate sanctuary from the chaos surrounding them. It’s a devastating, complex, and deliciously filthy story that leaves you breathless, keeps you on the edge of insomnia, and makes you want to update the terms and conditions of your sexual comfort zone 😈"

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Love this!

"Absolutely love your writing!! I’ve read everything you have on here"

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The UnHoly

"I find books in this writing style rare to come across. I could feel the tension through each line, each character, each scene. Xander had my attention from the start, but choosing him first didn’t diminish any of my desire for the others as well! While it is not the main theme of the story, I strongly resonate with the importance of language and choice! Beautifully crafted, patiently waiting for more stories, & it was a pleasure being apart of this journey! "

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Loved it

"I can't believe it's over. I loved it beginning, middle and end. All 5 guys had such distinctive allure, sex appeal and pull. Amara was a fantastic female lead. You wrote them all phenomenally. I look forward to reading more of your work 👏 👏 👏 👏 "

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Spectacular, sassy and funny

"What a spectacular story! Eden’s stories are always good, but I found this one particularly enjoyable. From a sassy spitfire FMC to her 5 unholy lovers (love Dominic in particular!) , and all the other personalities- there’s something for everyone- while still remaining very true to the author’s roots, found myself laughing, sweating, and generally on the edge of my seat throughout the read. Loved it so much I might go reread it again just for fun. "

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Huge fan

"Your writing style is by far my favorite. Your character development is unmatched. You don’t bog down with narration. The characters describe themselves in their actions and dialogue. I can’t wait to read the rest of this one."

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The tensioooooon

"Yet again another absolute gem. It makes you question your morals, takes over your dreams and leaves you out of breath and wanting more. So Eden ♥️"

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