Inkitt
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I love it

"I really love this story! My favorite characters are thane and Dante, and sometimes Kale too. I don't know why there are few bad reviews because I find it really interesting. Sometimes I can't put my phone down because I just want to keep reading. When the author releases only one or two chapters at a time, the wait for the next chapter feels so long. It's a really good story, and I can't wait for the next update."

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Nooooo

"Noooooooo. Where is Dante he needs to rescue she deserves better "

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One mate, four alphas

"I just discovered your books and I’m loving them. I started reading this one sooner that I was planning to, because I wanted to see why would someone score it so low and trash it. So far I have binged your other books, I can’t put them down and this one is no different. I wish people would be constructive with their feedback rather the act like a child throwing a tantrum. "

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Pat

"Interesting so far though Truth needs to come out. Dragging on a bit now. The 4 Alphas appear very weak minded and stupid. NOT Alphas, just horny fools as per Orphelia's sentiment. Orphelia needs a bit of happiness. Too much victimization and bullying. Scenes of making her watch them have intercourse is a bit too much, the table needs to turn. "

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😡😡😡😡😡

"This is shit. The Story ist Not moving Forward. How can a whole chapter Just be about sex. This is really Not worth reading😡😡😡😡😡"

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