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Luna three alphers

"Loved this novel exciting and in places heat stopping,"

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One mate, four Alpha’s

"I would absolutely recommend this book to everyone, it draws you in, and leaves you dumbfounded by some of the choices the main characters make, I’ve never had a book draw me in to the point of me feeling like I’m the actual person in the book getting dumped on!!!"

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Needing more 😭

"I am absolutely lost between updates 😭 I need Dante to come back with answers, I need Freya to be exposed and I need those quads to be given a reality right before Ophelia rejects them for Dante...and I need it now 😂"

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I love it

"I really love this story! My favorite characters are thane and Dante, and sometimes Kale too. I don't know why there are few bad reviews because I find it really interesting. Sometimes I can't put my phone down because I just want to keep reading. When the author releases only one or two chapters at a time, the wait for the next chapter feels so long. It's a really good story, and I can't wait for the next update."

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Nooooo

"Noooooooo. Where is Dante he needs to rescue she deserves better "

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One mate, four alphas

"I just discovered your books and I’m loving them. I started reading this one sooner that I was planning to, because I wanted to see why would someone score it so low and trash it. So far I have binged your other books, I can’t put them down and this one is no different. I wish people would be constructive with their feedback rather the act like a child throwing a tantrum. "

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Infuriatingly wonderful...

"Definitely worth reading, even though the characters will infuriate you completely 😅...I'm anxious to see how it unfolds😍👍👍"

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I’m loving it

"I’m curious where this is going and Dante, whats his deal. I hope Lia gets her revenge. I’m also afraid it’s going to end. "

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Pat

"Interesting so far though Truth needs to come out. Dragging on a bit now. The 4 Alphas appear very weak minded and stupid. NOT Alphas, just horny fools as per Orphelia's sentiment. Orphelia needs a bit of happiness. Too much victimization and bullying. Scenes of making her watch them have intercourse is a bit too much, the table needs to turn. "

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One Mate Four Alphas

"The story started off really well with a good plot, interesting characters, and a lot of potential. However, as it progressed, it began revolving too much around Freya and felt like the storyline was being stretched unnecessarily. Some parts started to feel repetitive, and I think the story could have been wrapped up much earlier without losing its impact. Overall, the beginning was engaging, but the later part felt unnecessarily prolonged, which took away from what could have been a stronger and more satisfying ending."

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Doubt

"I seriously don't understand why she is not rejecting them?"

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Repetitive

"Drags the story line out with not much happening in the chapters. This far into the book something needs to happen more than the same old weak lead female character. The story needs to start moving with more forward momentum... Side note - The editing is poor. There are several grammatical issues and more typos than one can keep count of."

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😡😡😡😡😡

"This is shit. The Story ist Not moving Forward. How can a whole chapter Just be about sex. This is really Not worth reading😡😡😡😡😡"

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One Mate, Four Alphas

"The plot never changed. Each chapter was repetitive. 88 chapters and the characters never evolved or progressed. I like the authors writing and the theme had potential, but readers won’t like reading about a damsel in distress that never changes and a villain sister that gets away with manipulating constantly. To me it was a waste of creative writing that kept recycling "

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