What is your opinion?
Hauntingly Real
"This short story picks up speed as it progresses leaving the reader wanting to read more.and learn more about the main character. The thought provoking story picks up speed as is progresses and the reader is suddenly made aware towards the end the real reasons behind the characters behaviour. i found this story very entertaining and read it several times. The writer should be commended and encouraged to put out similar stories which deserve a wider audience."
A Good Story with a Wonderful Twist
"The story starts out well with an interesting plot idea and good delivery. The bulk of the story is well written and entertaining, but the best part (in my opinion) is at the end, when the whole story is turned on its head. Saying more would result in spoilers so if you haven't already just go read the story. It's worth it."
Promising title
"Perhaps the one thing that attracted me to the story was the title. Has a certain mischievous spark that made me want for more. But my issue is that the story seems a bit rushed and confusing. Blunt descriptions, lack of punctuation and the sudden shifts in reality are what made me pull away from it. Love the concept though, it is rather different and refreshing."
