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An interesting take on Kpop idols!

"It's a pretty great story so far! I just wish the sentences weren't so flowery and long winded like Shakespeare. I'm glad I can see the visuals and exactly what's happening, but there are shorter ways to describe a room's atmosphere and what a character says. Have a good day, keep writing and keep improving! My favorite character is Beomgyu so far or "Beom-chan" as I lovingly dubbed him."

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K-pop meets Alpha/ Omega-verse.

"I really like the fact you use two different tropes/ themes. The Alphas/ Betas etc. that bring warewolf stories in mind inserted in the K-pop fandom sounds interesting. The names and some Korean words might be hard on people who just know English and are not too familiar with K-pop. I'm not sure who important that is but... Good work! I'll keep reading to see where it goes :)"

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Nice story with interesting plot

"This is my very first Alpha/Omega story and I am completely in love with it! You are weaving such a beautiful plot. all character's are so good. 😊"

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Love it

"This is gona be my very first bl novel so I am really exited so far love the concept the omega beta and alpa vibes are amazing and the character super exiting Love how the author has narrate everything . Going great job"

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