Inkitt
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Second Chances

"Fate has not been kind to Dominic. This has made him grow into a strong self sufficient individual. He shows all the best traits of a caring Alpha, protecting and looking after others. I can't wait to read more and watch the bond deepen between Dove and Dominic."

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I'm hooked!

"Already looking forward to what will happen next! Realistic dialogue and action, and I appreciate the background provided for Dominick. He clearly has been underestimated by his pack, but is proving his capabilities and strengths with Dove and the others. Fantastic job so far! 😁"

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Great read

"I like how each chapter leaves you wanting more, the writer leaves nothing out each chapter flows with the next so there's no confusion "

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An interesting MMC premise

"Don’t think I’ve read a story with a mute MMC (or FMC for that matter) before so was curious to see the premise of this story and how it rolls out. Early on, the reader is drawn in quickly to the circumstances surrounding Dominic and his childhood. I like that being mute doesn’t appear to be the only part of his identity: it plays a huge role, of course but I anticipate that as the story develops we will see and learn more about his personality, and his future mate bond. I also like the idea that the spoken word is just one of many ways that two people can communicate. "

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