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Wonderfully detailed

"I liked the details within this story. Everything is vivid, and it feels like you're in the book itself. I feel alongside the MC as I explore this dangerous world of dragons and politics. It definitely is a lot to take in at once. The reality of war and the unfortunate misunderstanding of how terrible it is. I highly suggest this for people who love other worlds, fantasy, and dangerous creatures. "

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Step Into This World of Wonder, Emotion, and Adventure!

"This is a great book that brings together physics, fantasy, medieval politics, kings, dragons, and a wonderful cast of characters. The story begins with a deeply emotional premise that can bring you to tears, but then takes an unexpected turn that is incredibly well developed. The imagery is fantastic. You can picture everything so clearly in your head, as if you're watching it unfold right before your eyes. If you're looking for a great book that will move you, excite you, make you smile, surprise you, and entertain you with plenty of action, this is a must-read. Step into this world. I can assure you, you're going to enjoy the journey!"

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An emotional and epic journey

"All it takes is a couple of paragraphs, and then... I found myself sitting in the scene, completely affected by the atmosphere written into it with the main character, Evie. The emotions and characters are written in a way that all it took was a couple of paragraphs to sit with them and relate to them. That's the strongest point of the story so far for me, how the characters are written and visualized. What Evie is going through is heartbreaking. It makes me want to hug her, and that's what makes her thoughts so relatable and makes her feel so human. It also makes the stakes so much higher because she's vulnerable, perhaps even more so in this journey. The imagery and atmosphere are so strong. The author definitely put a lot of time into thinking about how things look and describing them in the best way. So far, as I'm getting deeper into the story, it has a lot of lore, and things are explained well in each chapter. So, as much as you get new questions, you get more answers too. You might find yourself lost for a moment and then get more answers. I love good lore, and the premise of this story suggests that it has a lot of it. #IC10"

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Portals, Dragons, and Love Triangles!

"Whew this story really knows how to tug at your heartstrings! The main character, Evie, finds herself in an alternate reality which is currently thrust into a time of war. Although some of her decisions can be rash (made me a bit irritated with her as a character) it really delves into that realism especially with her leukemia diagnosis beforehand. The romance and banter is pretty fun, but emotional at the same time, and ooh lord the king really pisses me off lmao. The scenario all the characters are trapped in does help convey their complexity and how they act, and really shows many sides to the same story. I hope you guys enjoy this as much as I do, it's a pretty fun read that's easy to follow!"

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Where Reality Meets Fantasy

"Where reality meets fantasy. I was shocked from the very first chapter when Evie received the devastating news. At first, I thought this would be a story about a heroine fighting against her illness. But then... everything changed. In the following chapters, Evie is thrown into an entirely new world, where she has to fight not only her illness but also enemies she never imagined existed. The world the author has created is vivid and fascinating, filled with its own rules, dangers, and problems. Evie finds herself caught between two men, but even more than that, she is caught in the fear of her own pain. That fear sometimes pushes her into making the wrong choices and hurting the people who care about her. And I think that makes her journey even more emotional and relatable. I have a feeling she still has a very long journey ahead of her, and I’m definitely coming back to see where it takes her. I’m curious to discover more about this world. A beautiful mix of reality, fantasy, emotions, and mystery. I can’t wait to continue the journey with Evie. #IC10"

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Great

"The chemistry in this story is unlike anything I've read in a long time. Every interaction between the leads crackles with something unspoken and the author knows exactly when to let it breathe."

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A fun novel

"The story is mazing and gripping. How she goes into this new world and sets on a crazy adventure. It's an amazing story , very clearly written and the pictures do a lot of help. My fav part is girl with mouchtache- Zahara😂 I love that idea it's raw I feel . ❤️💖 I wanna complete the story so I might update my Reveiw later . But it's definitely a worth of reading ❤️💖 great work done by author cuz personally I feel these kinda hard to write down (according to me) so yeah bravo😁👏❤️"

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A thrilling fantasy tale packed with mystery, chaos, drama, and twists that will keep you turning the pages. ✨📖

"There is so much in this story that words can hardly do it justice. From the very first chapter, the narrative flows beautifully, pulling you deeper and deeper into the world with every page. The drama, suspense, mystery, world-building, and lore are all woven together so well that you'll constantly find yourself wondering what happens next. One thing I particularly enjoyed is how the story doesn't simply throw information at you all at once. The world gradually unfolds as you read, giving you little pieces of its history, its mysteries, and its lore along the way. There is always something new to discover, and even when you think you might have figured something out, the story has a way of making you question your assumptions. It really keeps that sense of curiosity alive. And the atmosphere! There are moments where you can almost feel yourself being pulled into the world alongside the characters. The descriptions help establish the setting without taking away from the actual story, and the details make the world feel like it has a history beyond what we're immediately seeing. There's clearly a lot of thought behind the universe the author has created, and it shows. And the characters? Absolutely wonderful. They each have their own unique personalities, motivations, and ways of interacting with the world around them. I especially love how their interactions feel natural rather than simply being there to move the plot forward. Their conversations, little moments, and relationships make them feel like actual people with their own lives and personalities. You can't help but get attached to them as you continue reading. Some characters make you want to cheer for them, some make you curious about their secrets, and others leave you wondering whether you should trust them at all. Haha. And honestly, those are the kinds of characters I love because they make me want to keep reading just to see where their stories will take them. Honestly, this story has a little bit of everything. There is excitement, chaos, drama, mystery, world-building, unexpected moments, and plenty of scenes that will keep your heart racing. And yes... even that bitty bit of romance. WOOHOO! I'm definitely keeping an eye on that part because you know I love seeing those little sparks develop naturally. What I also appreciate is that the story doesn't feel like it's relying on just one element to keep you interested. There's always something happening beneath the surface, whether it's a character interaction, a piece of lore, a mystery waiting to be uncovered, or another little detail that makes you wonder if there's more to the story than what we've been shown. The more you read, the more questions you have—and somehow, that only makes you want to read more. It's one of those stories where you finish a chapter and immediately think, "Okay... but WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!" Overall, this is a beautifully crafted story with an intriguing world, memorable characters, and plenty of mystery and suspense to keep you hooked. You can tell that the author has put a lot of thought, creativity, and love into building this world and its characters. If you're looking for a book that keeps you invested, gives you plenty to theorize about, and leaves you eagerly waiting for the next chapter, I highly recommend giving this one a read! ✨"

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Evie's Path

"I love the connection between Shawn and Evie, and your writing style. You are showing and not telling, allowing us readers to imagine us being right there with them. I can't wait to read more. You provide very descriptive details that caters to our senses like sounds, smells and hearing. "

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