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Summary

Anaya Vance comes to Montivale to seek revenge and goes to the most elite college in Montivale she thinks it's just another normal college..... until it didn't turned out for her

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11d ago
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Chapter#1 The New Transfer Student

Montivale—The city of rich and mafias, A city of Europe that was split in two parts: North and South

North and South always had conflicts, competing in everything—wars, business, power. In simple words, they were enemies.


There in South stood the most elite college of Montivale, in the South, South Montivale High, only rich could enter, and only being rich wasn't the enough, they had to be intelligent too.


A girl came running into the classroom. She was Chloe Sterling, 19 y/o, 1st year in South Montivale High. The professor wasn't in the class right now.

She went and sat beside The Sharma Brothers, The richest in Montivale— Aditya Sharma, the eldest son and Siddharth Sharma, youngest son.

Aditya was 20 y/o in 2nd year. He was there because their teacher was absent and the 2nd year got combined with the first year.

Siddharth Sharma was the youngest son he was 19 y/o also in 1st year.

Chloe was panting. Siddharth handed her water.

Siddharth: Why are you in such a hurry? Is the world ending? He said sarcastically.

Chloe annoyed with his question replied: Did you drop your brain on the way to class?

Siddharth: Did yo—

Aditya stopped them from starting a fight

Aditya: Guys! quit acting like children, He turned to Chloe, Why were you running? you know that you won't get expelled for being late.

"First of all, they can expel me for that" Chloe shot back " and Secondly, That wasn't the reason i was running."

"then what is the reason" Asked Siddharth annoyed.

Chloe then said excitedly "Guys, A student from north is transferring here"

Aditya and Siddharth didn't seem happy about it, then Siddharth asked: "Who?"

Chloe rolled her eyes "how would i know? idiot!"

Aditya asked "then how did you know someone will be transferring to—" He cut himself off then asked Chloe "Which year?"

Chloe raised her eyebrow in astonishment "looks like someone is interested in her"

Aditya let out a humourless laugh "I was just asking okay, and she won't even be that pretty"

Chloe smirked "and what if she is?

Aditya rolled his eyes "oh please! north and beautiful doesn't exist"

Siddharth said surprised "Chloe is right! She can be beautiful"

Aditya got annoyed "Be for real guys"

Just then the door opened.

The professor came in and said:

"we have a new student with us" He said as a girl stepped in— White crop top, Black jeans, a cap on head and a necklace which was probably her initial "A"

The professor said while pointing his had towards that girl

"Anaya Vance"

Everyone clapped. Chloe, Aditya and Siddharth didn't.

Anaya greeted them coldly, her cap covering her face "Good morning everyone! nice to meet you all"

Before Anaya could go to find a seat, the professor stopped.

"Ms.Vance caps aren't allowed in classroom, you have to take it off"

Anaya reluctantly takes off the cap and everyone stopped at the moment

Black hair tied in a ponytail, a few strands stuck to her cheeks, Sharp eyes, killing glare like if you ho near her you won't be alive.

She looks at the professor, who was still shocked

Anaya says to the professor "can i sit now?"

Professor replies "yeah, please find a seat"

Anaya went right past Aditya and Siddharth and sat on the last seat— Aditya and Siddharth's seat.

Everyone in the class held their breaths.

Aditya stood up and went to her. Then he said coldly "That's my seat, Get up"

Anaya said without looking at him "Is there your name on it, I can't see it."

Aditya looked at her amazed "Do you know who I am?"

Anaya looked at him smiled and said "No."

Siddharth got up from his seat "We are the sons of the richest man in Montivale"

"Oh. Are you?" Anaya said smiling then continued "Then why are you fighting over a seat with me"

Aditya lost his patience, but as he was going to say something, one of his best friends, Haris showed up in the class— Haris was 20, second year.

Haris said excitedly "Wanna play basketball ball"

Everyone looked at him.

Haris looked around and said calmly "What? coming or should I go"

Chloe dragged Aditya and Siddharth out of the class and said to Haris "They are coming"

Anaya picked up her bag and moved to the next row, and muttered stupid under her breath.



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