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Precious Writer

"Truly exceptional writing from the most precious submissive Kelly. Every story you write seems to get better. You are truly a treasure.. "

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Without my permisson

"Oh Kelly, what have you done... My sub is sitting by the bed, the window open, the morning sun kissing her beautiful, naked body - and she’s crying. Crying over your poem. Do you know, that she once promised me, that only I would be allowed, to make her cry? Not with sadness, fear or pain - no, but with happiness. And now she’s sitting there, by the bed, naked, caressed by the sun, and crying. Because of you out of joy I think to myself, actually, I should punish her now for breaking her promise. Or you, for pushing her this far. Or me, for letting it happen. But she’s so happy. You’ve made her happy. Through this poem, in which, as she says, she recognizes herself right down to the depths of her heart. And even if it happened without my permission, Kelly: Thank you for that"

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