Chapter 1: The weight of Forgotten Things...
Homerville. Those who came here never left the place. Because it was just the kind of town people called home. Nestled between rolling hills and endless stretches of pine trees, it carried a quiet charm that made strangers feel welcome and residents feel at home. The streets were lined with small family-owned shops, old bookstores with fading signboards, and cafes where orders were remembered before names were. Every morning, the old clock tower in the town square chimed softly as the town awakened.
The doors of Evermore Bakery opened at exactly six-thirty. The warm scent of freshly baked bread drifted into the cool morning air. For most people, it was comforting. For Lucas Laurens, it was simply routine. He adjusted the trays of croissants in the display case with practiced hands, barely noticing the customers who walked in and out.
“Good morning.” Mrs. Eleanor called from behind the counter. He offered her a small smile.
“Morning.”
Mrs. Eleanor had owned Evermore Bakery for nearly twenty years. She knew every customer by name and every regular order by heart. She also knew that Lucas often looked like he was carrying the weight of the world on his shoulders.
“You’ve been awfully quiet today.”
Lucas shrugged.
“Just thinking.”
Mrs. Eleanor laughed softly. “That’s your problem. You think too much.”
Lucas glanced out of the bakery window. The streets of Homerville bustled with life. People talked. Children laughed. Cars passed by. Everything looked exactly as it should. And yet, something felt unfinished. A strange heaviness sat quietly inside him. An ache without a reason.
“If the world had been left at my mercy, I would have forgotten them long ago.” The words escaped before he could stop them.
Mrs. Eleanor looked up from the register.
“If overthinking were a competition, Lucas, you’d win it every single time.”
A few customers nearby chuckled. Lucas forced a smile, but it never quite reached his eyes.
The truth was, he didn’t know who “they” were. He only knew that, somehow, the thought of them made his chest feel heavier.
Across town, the glass walls of Yulim Tech reflected the afternoon sunlight. Employees moved quickly through the corridors, carrying tablets and files while discussing deadlines and meetings. On the top floor, Edward Malfoy sat alone in his office. At twenty-six, he had everything people dreamed about. Success. Recognition. Wealth. His technology company had grown faster than anyone expected. Investors trusted him. Employees admired him. Strangers envied him. Yet every evening, he returned to an empty house. Edward leaned back in his chair and rubbed his tired eyes. His assistant entered quietly.
“Mr. Malfoy, your four o’clock meeting has been postponed.”
He nodded. “Thank you.”
As he left, he reached for the coffee machine in the corner of his office. Without thinking, he placed two mugs beneath it. Only after pouring the coffee did he pause. He stared at the second mug for a moment. A strange feeling settled over him. As though he had forgotten something important. He frowned and pushed the thought away. Too much work, he told himself. That had to be it. His phone buzzed. Three emails. Two business notifications. One calendar reminder. Nothing else. No messages. No missed calls. No one asking how his day had been. Edward locked his phone and turned toward the window. Below him, Homerville moved on without him. For the first time in a long while, success felt strangely empty.
At exactly 4:17 PM, Lucas glanced at the bakery clock. His hands froze. A sudden heaviness settled in his chest. For a brief moment, he felt certain he was forgetting something important. But the feeling disappeared before he could understand it. Across town, Edward looked up from his laptop. 4:17 PM. He checked the time twice. Then a third time. Why did that hour always feel familiar? Why did his mind insist that he should remember something? Neither of them had an answer. Neither of them knew why 4:17 PM always felt like the beginning of something they had already lost. As evening settled over Homerville, Lucas locked the doors of Evermore Bakery. Edward switched off the lights in his office. The old clock tower chimed in the distance. Life moved forward exactly as it always had. Yet both of them carried the same unshakable feeling. Something wasn’t quite right. They just didn’t know what.
Question: Why does 4:17 PM feel so important?
Riddle for Chapter 2: I return every day without being invited. You search for me without knowing why. At my arrival, your heart remembers what your mind forgot. What am I?









I have the same experience with minute 38😯 everytime I look at the time and it's x:38 I always wonder why it bothers me😯
The answer to the riddle? Lucas and Edward! ❤️🩹
Gosh!🥹 Looks like I found a novel I will be imagining for days now!😭