What is your opinion?
Kim sania
"Veryintresting and awesome story,. And all over all I apretiate ur story,. "
Heading: A beautiful and captivating start!
"I’m still in the process of reading your story, as my English is not yet perfect, but I am absolutely hooked! The premise of a forgotten princess with a tragic birth and an unhappy childhood, saved by her kind sister, is so compelling. The story is full of dramatic twists and turns, and I find myself on the edge of my seat with every chapter. I am very much looking forward to continuing this journey with your characters. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story! "
A Worthwhile Fantasy Journey
"An engaging story filled with emotion, political intrigue, and meaningful character growth. The ending made the entire journey worthwhile."
I love this book
"I really loved the beginning of this story. Your writing style is absolutely amazing and the plot is very interesting. I highly recommend this book to everyone who loves fantasy!"
The best book I've read in ages
"I have read other books, but this one caught my eye. This is perfecto. "
Engaging
"Really enjoying reading it! "
This book
"This book is so good and nice . Love it 💖 Keep going !!! Cheering for you 💖"
The Sea Hides Callides Calls
"Great start. Keep up the good work."
Good writing
"You write very well your story is moral story and we find these issues almost everywhere that you write in your story I wish that everyone read it and take lesson from it keep on writing "
A Story That Pulls You In
"This book immediately draws you in with its engaging writing and strong sense of mystery. The characters feel interesting and full of potential, and the plot sets up so many questions that you can’t help but want answers to. It’s the kind of story that keeps you thinking long after you put it down. I need more of it right away."
The Sea Hides Callides Call
"I haven't really read stories about sea creatures but with just one chapter, I think I am gonna need more. There something about the writer's way of delving one into the story, I feel like I am being taken to where the actual story is taking place. Well, let's hope for more chapters "
First chapter was inviting
"I enjoyed it and was sad to see it was the only chapter so far. I should have noticed that it was "i chapter". I am looking forward to following chapters."
Story cover outstanding and story give greek vibes
""The Sea Hides Callides' Calls is a beautifully written story that pulls readers into a world filled with mystery, emotion, and depth. The atmosphere feels immersive, and the author's descriptions make every scene vivid and memorable. I especially enjoyed how the story gradually reveals its secrets, keeping me curious about what would happen next. The characters feel layered and realistic, making it easy to become emotionally invested in their journey. The blend of emotional moments, intrigue, and storytelling creates a captivating reading experience. Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds and discovering more of Callides' journey.""
something number 12
"I like the fact that it is has a kraken and a person falling down the seas although it is a AI picture and it does not show who wrote the book. But is good overall"
I love this
"Love the names of the people, especially kodian!!! Best name ever sounds like a great name! Story plot and everything is great and interesting as well"
Fantastic Writing
""I really enjoyed reading The Sea Hides Callides. The story is engaging, the writing flows well, and it kept me wanting to read more.""
The Sea hides Callides'Calls
"Hello there, I saw you message and thought I would give it a quick read. Don't be offended but I got through the first half of Chapter 1 and stopped. It didn't hook me. It felt like an information dump. It is a narrative. There is nothing wrong with your writing style and vocabulary, I would just start the story off differently. Much love and Big HUGS "
nice
"A genuinely good start. Focus on tightening the main dialogues, and add more sibling rivalry to heighten the emotional turmoil."
IT has an entertaining start to it
"Spiros started out slowly , not loved forgotten but i like that she does not wait to be loved . she becomes something her other sisters are not . AND FOR HER FATHER TO ASK HER TO LOOK FOR HER SISTER, this shows just how capable she is. so good for her. I like the story, though do not rush through parts like in the second chapter, it takes a minute to realize that she has grown. but all in all i like it."
Idk what to write here???
"I like the character in the first chapter a lot. You get a real feel for who she is and what she's been through. The only thing that bothered me was that I was given a whole story of what happened, but it told me nothing about what would happen in the future. No clue why this information she's telling us has anything to do with what she'll do. And you tell us about when she's a baby, and then when she's five, and ten, but where is she now? I think it would help if you added at the end of a chapter her goal, like "So that's what I had to do. Play the part of a perfect daughter to see the only one who'd ever treated me like anything but dirt on her wedding day. Only problem was blahblahblah." Maybe it got cut off or something in what I saw, because other reviewers mentioned characters and things that I didn't see. For me, it ended when the father slammed the door shut after telling the MC to be perfect in life. I don't know if that's right, but it's all I saw. Overall, I really like where your story is going and the characters in it. -- IDKtrynawriteabook"
