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Muy bueno!

"Ha estado muy bien estructurado, la historia muy bien hilada. Solo cambiaría que si ella hubiera querido enseñar en los entrenamientos, nada de campo, haciendo de maestra. Pero la parte que el descubría todo lo que en realidad sentía... Impresionante el efecto dominó y además valorar o darse cuenta cuando se ha perdido (perdón si es un cliché pero las mujeres somos más sentidas). No me suelen gustar las de mafia pero a ésta la doy un 100!"

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THE HEIR'S Shadow

"Un chapitre final un peu rapide à mon goût parce que je ne voulais pas les quitter, mais bravo pour ce livre ! "

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Good

"Quite good for a novella. Impressive writing style and we'll edited. Just one thing- Karla keeps referring herself to a stray cat and while at first it makes sense the analogy gets stale after a while. "

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Preciosa 😍

"Me gusto muchísimo,muchas gracias por compartirla 😍😍"

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THE HEIR'S SHADOW

"A great Mafia love story. Slightly different to your normal violent underworld stories so it's a lovely light read. I enjoyed it."

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Good read. Different plot.

"The emotions are well depicted in this book. Good read. Different plot. Enjoyed reading this one."

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Karla

"Good story. I was afraid for awhile that she wouldn’t get the dude but yeah - she did!"

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The Heirs Shadow

"Brilliant story, well written, and it gave me an afternoon's escape. 😊 "

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The Heir's Shadow

"I found the book interesting and enjoyable to read, and would recommend highly. I felt it truly deserved this rating. "

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Its compelling.. I was completely immersed... I didn't want to stop reading.... Until she ran away... The story became kinda obvious from there.

"I like the writing. Its a very cool and unique story"

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The Heir’s Shadow

"I liked that the book moves at a good pace. I would recommend this to someone who likes a sad but good story. I also like that female lead character doesn’t give into the males charms. "

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Atrapante

"Una historia distinta a las que eh leído, muy conforme con lo que estoy leyendo "

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Ava!

" Another win for Ava Reed! Very well written and another much enjoyed read for me! Keep writing your great stories!😃👏"

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Plot

"The best slow-burn romance ever read "

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The Heirs Shadow

"This is a very good, well written story. I enjoyed it."

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Must read

"Good storyline. Great characters. Found i had to sit & finish this story without stop. Loved it. Thank you "

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The Heir's shadow

"Yet another beautiful piece by the author. Lovely :) "

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The don's shadow

"Ava Reed, you're my new favorite author in Inkitt! I like your style in story telling. I wish I could write too! :) This is the second book I've read, two days in a row :D I can't wait for a new book tomorrow! Kudos, Ava!"

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Me encanta esta historia

"Me encanta como le da un buen giro argumentar al desarrollo del personaje de Karla, es tofo lo que espero de un personaje empoderar pero igual de consciente de sus debilidades emocionales"

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the heirs shadow

"it was wonderful, I love it, the end was superb you ae really a great writer"

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