Inkitt
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Smashing

"Heart smashing so good "

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This book

"It's so good . I love it . Keep going!!!!"

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The trial

"Interesting idea. I liked everything. Keep up the good work."

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"I understand you used AI to help write your book but how its written seems more like AI wrote the entire thing. Theres a ton of repeating and overly long descriptions of non-important things. There is little detail about what the character looks like, his emotions, and what the area around him looks like. Just a bunch of long descriptive words without actually describing anything. Thats something you need to work on to make reading your story more enjoyable and understandable. You have a great concept but I would suggest using less AI and more of your own brain."

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