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"strong voice and a payoff that sticks, some midpoint plotting that's serviceable but not surprising, Surprising great short story."

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KOYA :Ascend The Rust

"What a shockingly good story.Good writing and as good a Sci-Fi short story as any ive read.Great characters,The world you built is cruel and ingenious .I But still had a touch of humanity & empathy.I really enjoyed reading this story.It was a sad ending but the overall storyline & plot great.Good writing. Thank you for sharing Peace"

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