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The lines we cross

"Great work. Luved it"

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The Lines We Cross

"Loved it! Well written! "

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The lines were cross

"I really enjoyed this, the build up, the slow burn, the blinders removed from her failing relationship. I liked the breakup but it was almost anticlimactic... He was such a douche- I expected more of a fight. "

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