What is your opinion?
Super Buch 👍
"Ich liebe es ❤️"
Julie
"I have read a lot of romance books and this one pulled me in. Payton has her hands full with the team but I feel she is way ahead of all of these men but has her work cut out for her with Brandon . She will handle this with the smile of the devil and in heels"
Nice and powerful
"I really love payton as a character, powerful, brighy nad kind"
DAMAGE CONTROL ON THIN ICE
"This is a very engaging opening. The voice is sharp, witty, and confident, and the banter immediately establishes the protagonist's personality. The dialogue flows naturally, making it easy to keep reading. Here are two concise suggestions the author could use to make it even stronger: Your dialogue is fantastic and the protagonist has a memorable, distinctive voice that grabs attention immediately. To make it even stronger, consider slowing down the transition from the meeting to the blackmail reveal so the tension has more time to build, and add a few subtle physical reactions to balance the fast-paced dialogue with emotional depth."
