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BEFORE THE DEMON WAKES

Summary

Ten years ago, a nameless monster went on a bloodthirsty rampage through a crowded market, changing Maya's life forever. In a moment of blind panic, she grabbed her youngest sister and ran, accidentally leaving her little brother, Leo, behind. She thought he was dead. Instead, Leo survived, taken in by a ruthless mafia cartel that twisted his abandonment into a burning hatred, training him to become a heartless weapon. Now part of an elite rescue team, Maya lives to protect her remaining family and hunt down the creatures threatening their world. But the pressure is suffocating-until she meets Kai. Gentle, protective, and completely ordinary, Kai becomes the one safe haven where Maya can drop her guard. As they fall into a deep, passionate romance, he feels like the only good thing left in her chaotic world. But a dark invasion is brewing from the spirit realm, and the monster from Maya's past has returned to strike again, brutally killing her parents. Consumed by grief, Maya vows to hunt the beast down and execute it. But in a city drowning in mafia blood wars and shadow creatures, the truth is the most dangerous trap of all and the monster she's hunting is much closer than she thinks.

Status
4mo ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Chapter 1



The Weight of a Hand*

The open-air market was a chaotic symphony of smells and sounds-the sharp tang of roasting peppers, the loud bartering of vendors, and the bright laughter of children weaving through the stalls. Ten-year-old Maya held tightly to the tiny, sticky hand of her four-year-old sister, Lily. Behind them, their seven-year-old brother, Leo, was busy kicking a deflated soccer ball against a wooden crate, entirely in his own world.


"Leo, keep up," Maya called out, mimicking her mother's strict tone. "If we lose the money Mom gave us for the groceries, we're dead."

Leo rolled his eyes but jogged a few paces to catch up, his bright grin showing off a missing front tooth. It was an ordinary Saturday. The sun was warm, the sky was clear, and they were safe


Until the air went cold.

It didn't happen slowly. One second, a woman was laughing while wrapping plantains in newspaper; the next, an earth-shattering screech tore through the market, vibrating right through the dirt and into Maya's bones.

The screams followed instantly.

"Monster! Run!"


The crowd exploded into a panicked stampede. Huge wooden stalls were flipped over, shattering into splinters. People scrambled over one another, desperate to escape a terrifying, towering shadow moving with unnatural speed through the dust. Maya couldn't see what it was through the blinding cloud of dirt, but she heard the horrific, wet sound of flesh tearing, followed by shrieks that cut off far too quickly.

Terror, cold and absolute, seized her.

"Maya!" Lily wailed, bursting into tears as she was nearly knocked off her feet by a fleeing vendor.

Panic stripped Maya of her ability to think. Her survival instinct slammed into overdrive. She grabbed Lily by the waist, scooping her up against her chest, and bolted toward the exit. She ran blindly, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird, the sounds of slaughter echoing right at her heels.

It wasn't until she burst through the market gates and sprinted down the chaotic main road that a cold, sickening realization pierced through her adrenaline.

The ball. She hadn't heard the deflated soccer ball kicking against the dirt.


Maya spun around in a frantic circle, the roaring crowd brushing past her. "Leo?!" she screamed, her voice cracking. "Leo!"

The market gates were entirely swallowed by thick grey smoke and dust. There was no sign of a seven-year-old boy. Just a wall of screaming people fleeing for their lives. She took a step back toward the smoke, but Lily clutched her neck, crying hysterically.

If I go back, we both die.

The thought was a brutal, ugly flash. Tears blinding her vision, Maya turned her back on the smoke, gripped Lily tighter, and ran.

A battered, old yellow transit bus was idling at the edge of the intersection, its doors open as the driver frantically waved people inside. It was already dangerously overcrowded, passengers packed tight against the windows, faces pale with terror.

"Moving! We are moving now!" the driver yelled, shifting the gears with a loud grind.


Maya threw herself up the metal steps just as the doors slammed shut behind her. The bus lurched forward, tires screeching against the asphalt as it sped away from the burning market district.

Maya collapsed into the narrow aisle, pulling Lily into her lap. Both of them were shaking violently, covered in dirt and sweat. Maya pressed her forehead against the back of a vinyl seat, her chest heaving. He's gone, a voice whispered in her head. You left him. You left Leo.

"Is everyone okay? Is anyone bleeding?" a man near the front shouted, trying to calm the panicked passengers.

Next to Maya, huddled in the cramped footwell of the back row, was a boy. He looked to be around her age, wearing a oversized, dusty shirt. He was trembling harder than anyone else on the bus, his knees pulled tightly to his chest, his eyes wide and completely vacant, staring at the floorboards as if he were looking right through them. He looked entirely alone.

Maya wanted to reach out, to offer the same comfort she was trying to give Lily, but the overwhelming weight of her own guilt kept her paralyzed.

For an hour, the bus drove in a tense, suffocating silence, leaving the city far behind. The driver had taken the old, lonely back roads to avoid the emergency vehicles clogging the highways. There were no streetlights out here-just dense, towering forest flanking both sides of the asphalt, swallowing the bus in heavy shadows.


Then, the engine gave a violent, metallic cough.

The headlights flickered once, twice, and died. The bus sputtered, rolled a few yards, and groaned to a complete halt in the dead center of the pitch-black, isolated road.

"No, no, no," the driver muttered, frantically turning the ignition. The engine just clicked. "The alternator is shot. Everyone stay calm, I have a radio-"

A low, guttural growl vibrated from the back of the bus.

It didn't sound human. It sounded like tearing metal and boiling blood.

"What was that?" a woman whispered, her voice trembling in the dark.

Maya's eyes snapped toward the back corner. In the shadows, the quiet boy was no longer trembling. He was standing up, his spine cracking with a horrifying, unnatural sound. Through the darkness, Maya caught the faint, terrifying glint of something monstrous breaking through his skin.

A sudden, agonizing scream pierced the dark as the man closest to the back was violently thrown against the window, shattering the glass. Blood splattered across the ceiling.


"Open the doors! Open the doors!"

The bus erupted into pure madness. Maya didn't wait. She grabbed Lily, scrambled over a row of seats, and kicked open one of the emergency side windows. She tumbled out into the dirt road, scraping her knees, and pulled Lily out behind her.

Behind them, inside the metal hull of the bus, the screaming stopped abruptly, replaced by the terrifying sound of something heavily tearing through flesh.

"Run into the trees!" Maya sobbed, dragging Lily by the hand as they plunged into the thick, black labyrinth of the forest.

They ran until their lungs burned, completely losing their bearings in the dark, until the sounds of the bus faded into nothingness. They were lost, completely alone, and her family was gone.

Miles away, back on that lonely, blood-slicked road, the silence returned.


The boy collapsed onto the dirt outside the ruined bus, his chest heaving as his body shrank back into a frail, human frame. He gasped for air, his eyes fluttering open. He looked at his hands, covered in dark blood, and then looked at the gruesome scene around him.

Terrified, utterly confused, and crying, the boy began to stumble down the dark road, running away from the nightmare he didn't realize he had caused. He ran until his legs gave out, collapsing into a dead faint on the gravel shoulder.

An hour later, the sharp beams of a luxury sedan's headlights cut through the darkness, slowing to a stop just before the unconscious boy.

The door opened, and a wealthy, elegant older woman stepped out, her eyes widening in shock as her driver shone a flashlight on the child's pale face.

"Oh, the poor thing," the woman gasped, rushing forward to kneel in the dirt. She pressed a gentle hand to his forehead. "He's freezing. Look at him... he's just a child. Is anyone else out here?"


The driver scanned the tree line with his flashlight, seeing nothing but empty shadows. "No one, ma'am. He looks completely alone. An orphan, maybe."

The woman, childless for decades and feeling a sudden, fierce tug in her chest, wrapped her expensive coat around the boy's shoulders. "We can't leave him here to die. Lift him into the back seat. We're taking him home."

As the driver lifted the boy, the child stirred slightly, mumbling a single word in his sleep-a name he wouldn't remember when he woke up.

Kai.


#darkromance #longlostsibling #demon

#mystery

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