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To readers returning I have edited and reworked the first 30 chapters and this isn’t finished yet, because I haven’t worked out the ending but I’m getting close. Thank you so much for reading ❤️❤️❤️ My sister cries I hold my legs to my chest Blood is all over the ground. How could this of happened? Her pain shakes me. I wish I could help. I can't move. Blood pools at my feet.
The Monster That Follows Us
By Alysin Mercury
Book 1
Kole is a monster, he was the monster that I couldn’t get rid of. His obsession with me was Uncontrollable. But his way to get to me was even worse.
Rule #1
Don’t let anyone see you broken.
Rule #2
Don’t let them get to you.
Rule #3
Don’t let yourself fall in love again.
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