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I Was Hooked!

"The story is amazing! Especially the characters. They all had such distinct voices and complex personalities, and the sadness and danger was levied with just the right amount of humour every now and then. And Adelyn's sass was just mwah! I do wish you'd elaborated more on Julius and Katy's backstory, but I'm guessing this is the part of a series, so maybe you'll do that in one of the sequels. The names were kinda hard to keep up with too, but hey, I could remember the names of the characters who physically appeared in the story, so yeah. Anyway, I loved it, for the record. (Okay, why the hell is it showing 0 chapters read??? Anyway)"

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I like it

"The story is truly engaging, well written, and filled with amazing characters. Congratulations! I highly recommend reading it, you'll definitely enjoy it."

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