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La fé, algo tan preciado para algunos y tan odiado por otros, pero siempre llegarás a lo mismo si preguntas lo que significa: La certeza y convicción en un ser divino, sobre todo en la biblia se toma en cuenta. Sin embargo, ¿Qué sucede cuando esto pasa de ser un salvavidas a una herramienta de temor y control? ¿Acaso la fé ciega te podrá salvar de los demás o de ti mismo? ¿Se supone que las palabras podrán arreglar tu mente dañada? La historia nos ha mostrado que la religión no conoció la división entre lo real y lo falso. Y Lucas sólo quedó atrapado en medio de este terrible dilema.
-Saludos a aquellos que encuentren este cuento, hecho con mucha dedicación, espero dejar una huella en el lector; debo explicar que este escrito no busca atacar a ninguna persona o religión, sino retratar las actitudes tóxicas que pueden realizar cualquiera de las mismas.
¡Disfruten!
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