Wow! Super tight pacing, well done!

"I like how quick and fast this story is. I also like that you didn't do the details to death. I like be able to wonder what those creatures are. Some type of vampire? Aliens? Demons? Why is she suddenly able to see their orange-ness? Was it just her time? It's a good way to keep the story in someone's head. I love the detail about the lights changing from blue to white and back again and how it kinda connects to how her car was on the fritz. The only thing I noticed were a few typos (aura's vs auras) but nothing really major. For the most part, this story is very well polished! Great story!!"