Until You Come Back
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Until You Come Back

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Story Note

Hello, dear reader. 🤍

Thank you for giving this story a chance.

Until You Come Back is a slow-burn romance about friendship, first love, promises, and the unexpected turns life can take. The characters, places, and events in this novel are fictional and created purely for storytelling.

If you enjoy emotional journeys, playful friendships, heartfelt moments, and stories that stay with you long after you’ve finished reading, I hope you’ll enjoy this one too.

New chapters will be updated regularly.

Happy reading!

— The Secret Writer ✨

Summary

At fourteen, Namah never imagined that a new town would change her life forever. What began as an unexpected friendship with five strangers slowly became the most precious part of her world. Among them was Sameer—the boy who never stopped teasing her, making her laugh, and unknowingly stealing her heart. But just when love was about to find its way, destiny had other plans. He left with one promise. *"I'll come back."* Will promises survive time, distance, and fate?

Status
3mo ago
Chapters
13
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

A New Beginning

“Sometimes, the people who change our lives don’t arrive with a grand entrance. They simply walk in... and quietly become our entire world.”


When I was fourteen, life was beautifully simple.

I lived in the heart of Kashmir, where every morning smelled of fresh pine trees and every evening disappeared behind snow-covered mountains. The rivers sparkled like glass under the sunlight, and the cool breeze carried the scent of flowers through the narrow streets.

To me, it wasn’t just a place.

It was home.

Every evening, the neighborhood echoed with the laughter of children. We spent hours playing hide-and-seek, running through tiny lanes until our mothers called us home before dinner.

Back then, life felt endless.

Back then...

We had no idea how quickly everything could change.


It had always been just my mother and me.

People often felt sorry for us.

I never understood why.

Yes, my father had left us when I was too young to remember him. I didn’t know where he was, and honestly... I had stopped wondering years ago.

Because my mother had never allowed me to feel incomplete.

She wasn’t just my mother.

She was my entire world.

She was an artist.

Every morning, she sat beside the window with her old wooden easel, carefully mixing colors before bringing blank canvases to life. She painted mountains, rivers, flowers, sunsets—everything she wished people could see through her eyes.

Unfortunately...

Beautiful paintings didn’t always sell for beautiful prices.

Sometimes people admired her work for hours, only to ask,

“Can you make it a little cheaper?”

She always smiled.

Always agreed.

And came home with just enough money to buy groceries for another week.

I hated watching her struggle.

Not because we were poor...

But because she deserved so much more.

That was the day I made a promise to myself.

“One day, I’ll make her proud.”


Unlike most girls my age, I never dreamed about expensive clothes or luxurious vacations.

I loved watching sunsets from our rooftop.

I loved the smell of rain.

I loved collecting smooth stones from the river.

And I smiled...

Far more than I cried.

People often asked me how I managed to stay happy all the time.

I never had an answer.

Maybe...

Happiness was simply a choice.


A week later...

Everything changed.

My mother received an offer to teach painting at a small art academy in another town. The salary wasn’t much better, but it promised a fresh start.

She looked at me nervously that evening.

“We’ll have to move.”

I looked around our tiny house.

The walls covered with paintings.

The window where my mother painted every morning.

The rooftop where I watched sunsets.

Every memory lived inside those walls.

Leaving felt impossible.

But if it meant giving my mother a better life...

I’d leave without complaining.


My first day at the new school was terrifying.

New uniform.

New classroom.

New faces.

Everyone already had friends.

Everyone already belonged somewhere.

I quietly walked to the last bench near the window and hoped nobody would notice me.

The teacher introduced me to the class before continuing the lesson.

For the next few hours, I simply stared outside the window, watching clouds drift across the sky.

Maybe starting over wasn’t meant for people like me.

The lunch bell finally rang.

Students rushed out of the classroom, laughing and talking among themselves.

I stayed where I was.

Alone.

Until someone placed a lunchbox on my desk.

I looked up.

A girl with bright eyes and a warm smile stood in front of me.

“You’re the new student, right?”

I nodded.

“I’m Sana.”

She smiled even wider.

“And from today...”

“...you’re not eating lunch alone.”

Before I could answer, she grabbed my wrist and pulled me outside.

“Come on! Everyone’s waiting.”

Everyone?


Under the shade of a huge maple tree sat five students.

One girl.

Three boys.

And a bicycle lying on the grass for absolutely no reason.

Sana pointed toward them proudly.

“Meet our gang.”

She pointed at a boy reading a thick novel.

“That’s Anay.”

Without looking up, he gave me a small nod before returning to his book.

“Books are his first love,” Sana whispered dramatically.

“He’ll probably marry a library one day.”

Everyone laughed.

Except Anay.

Next came a quiet girl adjusting her glasses.

“That’s Sidhi.”

She smiled politely.

“Hi.”

“And this is Meera.”

Another book lover.

She looked up from her notebook and greeted me with a soft smile.

Then...

There was the last person.

He was sitting on the grass, trying to fix the chain of his bicycle.

His hands were covered in grease.

His hair was a complete mess.

And yet...

He looked strangely confident.

Sana sighed dramatically.

“And that’s Sameer.”

As if he had heard his name, he looked up.

Our eyes met for the very first time.

He stood up, wiped his hands on his jeans, and walked toward me with the most annoying grin I had ever seen.

“So...”

“You’re the famous new girl?”

I frowned.

“Famous?”

“I’ve been hearing about you since morning.”

He folded his arms.

“I expected someone taller.”

The group burst into laughter.

I crossed my arms.

“I expected someone smarter.”

The laughter grew louder.

Sameer placed a hand over his chest dramatically.

“Ouch.”

“I’ve known you for exactly ten seconds and you’ve already hurt my feelings.”

“I can do worse.”

“Oh?”

He smiled.

“I think we’re going to get along just fine.”

“I highly doubt that.”

“Challenge accepted.”

Everyone around us laughed again.

I didn’t.

But somewhere deep inside...

I knew one thing.

This boy was going to be the biggest headache of my life.

I just didn’t know...

He would also become the biggest reason behind my happiest memories.


End of Chapter 1

“Some strangers don’t become friends overnight.

Some become your favorite person... before you even realize it.”



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Chapter Notes

Some promises are stronger than distance. Some goodbyes are never meant to be forever.

At fourteen, all Namah wanted was a fresh start after moving to a new town with her hardworking mother. A simple introduction leads her to a group of five friends who slowly become her second family.

Among them is Sameer—a carefree boy who never misses a chance to tease her. They argue over the smallest things, challenge each other every day, and pretend they can’t stand one another. But as the years pass, laughter turns into friendship, friendship turns into unspoken feelings, and the two hearts begin to realize that some bonds are impossible to ignore.

Just when everything starts falling into place, fate forces them apart.

Before leaving, Sameer makes one promise.

“I’ll come back.”

But can love survive distance, time, and the uncertainty of life?

A heartwarming slow-burn romance filled with friendship, first love, unforgettable memories, and a promise that refuses to fade.

elisecdavies24
elisecdavies24

Sameer is my type of guy, first off. Humor is the language of the world. He speaks fluently and his heart is kind. And mischievous. I think the most difficult part of childhood is an unexpected move from everything a child has ever known.

Namah was fortunate she found friendship and laughter with a group of cool kids. Not 'the' cool kids, who usually are nothing but trouble. But...cool...kids.

I liked the humble beginnings Namah came from, I liked how strong her mom is, for it's even harder to take that chance in life and leave everything you know is certain for uncertainty especially if you have children to fret over.

All in all, a charming start to a coming of age story that I will be interested to see continue...the writer has pulled me in with honest, forthright characters, good solid descriptions and a loving soft touch that allows the reader to sit back, relax and enjoy.

4 months
1
Pip Spencer
Pip Spencer

Great opening chapter. I was immediately drawn into the story.

4 months
1
LunaMoonGoddess1
LunaMoonGoddess1

Be careful of your heart, Namath. Sameer might snatch it away! 💕

4 months

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