Fallen Star by Promeus Amon at Inkitt
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Fallen Star

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Summary

When a star falls from the sky over the remote mountains of Montana, Christopher expects wreckage and fire. What he finds instead is a survivor who should not exist. Saka is beautiful, otherworldly, and carrying secrets from a world light-years away. Burned, and barely alive, he should have died with the others. Instead, Christopher makes a choice that changes everything: he brings the stranger home and hides him from the authorities closing in. As Saka heals, the two men are forced into close quarters on Christopher’s isolated ranch. What begins as wary protection slowly ignites into something deeper. Their connection is electric, undeniable, and dangerous. Saka’s past is catching up with him. In a world that was never meant to know him, one man’s heart may be the only home Saka has left. From lovers to rivals and to reluctant allies to something far more intimate, Fallen Star is a sensual sci-fi story about second chances, and the courage it takes to love someone who fell from the stars.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
7
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: Falling Star

The last light of day painted the Beartooth Mountains in deep golds and purples as Christopher stood on the wide lawn of his family ranch. At twenty-five, Chris had already taken on the quiet weight of the place. The old wooden farmhouse, with its wide porch and weathered shingles, had been in his family for three generations. Now it was just him and the land. Hundreds of acres of rolling foothills, pine stands, and open pasture outside the small town of Red Lodge, Montana.

He took a slow sip from the bottle of beer in his hand, letting the cool evening breeze cut through his flannel shirt. The sky was vast here, bigger than anywhere else on Earth. Stars were already pricking through the deepening blue. Most nights, Chris found peace in that emptiness. Tonight, though, something felt off.

A faint streak of light caught his eye, brighter than any shooting star he had ever seen. It moved slower than it should, trailing a glowing tail with an odd silver-blue shimmer. Chris frowned and lowered the bottle. Meteors did not look like that. They did not seem to aim.

The streak grew, arcing toward the forested ridges to the northeast. A low rumble rolled across the valley a second later, more felt than heard.

“Shit,” Chris muttered. He set the beer down on the porch railing and jogged toward his old Ford pickup parked beside the barn. If that was a plane or some fool in a small aircraft, someone might be hurt. The nearest help was miles away, and the authorities would take time to mobilize out here.

He climbed into the truck. The engine roared to life. Gravel sprayed as he pulled out onto the dirt road heading toward the mountains. The glowing trail was already fading, but a faint column of smoke rose in the distance, backlit by the last of the sunset.

The road turned rough quickly, winding up into the foothills. Chris gripped the wheel tighter. Headlights cut through the gathering darkness. Trees whipped past. His heart beat faster with every mile. Part of him wondered why he was racing toward trouble instead of calling it in. Another part, the part that had spent years helping neighbors through blizzards and wildfires, knew he could not just sit and wait.

The smoke grew thicker. The air smelled of burnt metal and scorched earth as he finally killed the headlights and eased the truck to a stop at the edge of a small clearing. He grabbed a flashlight and stepped out. Boots crunched on pine needles.

The scene hit him like a punch to the gut.

A crater had been gouged into the forest floor. Trees snapped like matchsticks around it. In the center lay something sleek and unnatural. An elongated silver-metallic craft, maybe forty or fifty feet long, partially buried nose-first in the dirt. Its hull had elegant, almost organic curves. Smooth metal caught the dying light with a faint metallic sheen. Faint glowing lines, like circuits, flickered weakly along its side. One section of the hull was torn open, exposing strange interior compartments. Small fires crackled around the wreckage, sending black smoke curling into the sky.

Chris’s mouth went dry. This was not human technology. Not anything he had ever seen or even imagined.

Then he saw the bodies.

Three of them. Men, naked, sprawled on the scorched ground near the torn opening. Their skin was blistered and charred black-red from intense heat. The smell of burnt flesh hit him hard. He forced himself closer and checked for signs of life. Nothing. Pulses gone. They were gone.

Movement caught his eye.

One more figure, a young man who looked maybe twenty-six, was on his knees a few yards away. Completely naked. His skin flushed a violent red from heat. Bruises and small cuts marked his arms and torso. Even in the dim light, Chris could see he had strikingly pale, almost porcelain skin beneath the burns. The young man pushed himself up with trembling arms, swaying badly. He got one foot under him, then the other, standing for a brief, unsteady second. His eyes, unfocused and pained, swept the area as if searching for something familiar.

Then his legs buckled. He collapsed hard onto the dirt and lay still.

Chris’s training kicked in before his fear could. He ran forward and knelt beside the stranger. The young man was breathing. Shallow and ragged, but alive. His skin was fever-hot to the touch. Chris checked for obvious broken bones, then glanced back at the approaching sirens in the far distance. Helicopters would be here soon. Military, probably. Whatever this was, the authorities would take the survivor away, if he even survived that long out here.

“I’ve got you,” Chris said quietly, his voice was rough. He did not know why he was doing this. He only knew he could not leave him.

He lifted the young man. Surprisingly heavy, all solid muscle despite the burns. He carried him back to the truck and laid him carefully. He covered him with an old wool blanket and a tarp to hide him and protect against the cooling night air. Then he climbed back behind the wheel and drove. Fast but careful. Sticking to back trails that would keep him out of sight of the main roads.

The drive back to the ranch felt endless. Every set of distant lights made his stomach tighten. He kept glancing in the rearview mirror, half expecting the stranger to sit up or the military to appear behind him. But the young man remained unconscious in the back.

By the time Chris pulled up to the dark farmhouse, his hands were shaking on the wheel. He killed the engine and sat for a moment, listening to the quiet.

He carried the stranger inside. Boots heavy on the wooden floors. He laid him gently on the bed in the guest room. The young man’s skin was still too hot. Chris fetched clean cloths, cool water, and the first-aid kit. He wiped away dirt and soot as best he could, covered the worst burns with ointment and gauze, and draped a light sheet over him for warmth.

For a long moment, Chris just stood there in the dim lamplight, staring at the unconscious man in his bed. The stranger’s face was strikingly handsome even through the pain and exhaustion. Sharp jaw, dark lashes, that unnatural porcelain pallor. There was something different about him. Not just the crash. Something Chris could not name.

He sank into the chair by the bed and ran a hand through his hair.

“What the hell did I just do?” he whispered.

Outside, the distant sound of helicopters echoed faintly across the mountains.

The stranger stirred slightly. A soft groan escaped his lips, but he did not wake.

Chris stayed where he was, watching over him as the night deepened around the ranch.

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