The Divine Carnival: The Edge Of Reality by Alice Capetillo at Inkitt
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The Divine Carnival: The Edge of Reality

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Summary

A young woman named Clara arrives in a forgotten town, San Lúcido, where a mysterious carnival appears only to those who carry deep desires or wounds from the past. Drawn by the promise of answers, Clara discovers that the carnival is not merely a spectacle, but a dark mirror of human longings, where each attraction is an emotional trap that demands a price in exchange for granting wishes. As she explores the hypnotic Ferris wheel, the fortune-telling snail, the house of mirrors, and the enigmatic minstrel, Clara is confronted with visions of her own past and future, revealing unsettling truths about her family and her identity. She soon realizes that the fair is a living entity that feeds on dreams and nightmares, and that her arrival was no accident: she is destined to become the guardian of this liminal place, where light and shadow are forever intertwined. A story about the cost of desires, memory as a prison, and the courage to face one’s own shadows to find redemption. All rights reserved

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

CHAPTER 1: THE ARRIVAL

On a somber afternoon, the sky above San Lúcido drew on a mantle of sorrow as the clouds churned in a whirlwind of restless shadows. The town, small and forgotten by time, seemed to hold its breath before an extraordinary event—though the murmurs among its people hinted that the extraordinary might prove more terrifying than enchanting.

Clara arrived on a creaking wooden train that slid through the mist like a whisper. Her eyes, wide and brimming with curiosity, shone with the promise of the unknown, even as she ignored the chill that crept down her spine. The carriage was nearly empty, save for an old woman who, with a vacant gaze, stroked a black cat that seemed more shadow than living creature. Clara sensed the air was charged with something beyond simple dampness; it was an electric feeling, a warning disguised as fascination.

Stepping off the train, the scent of cotton candy wrapped around her, sweetly deceptive. Yet beneath that sugared smell lurked something more unsettling, as if the very air were steeped in dark secrets. Clara felt a slight tremor in her hands as she made her way toward the central square, where a crowd had gathered, hypnotized by flickering lights dancing in the gloom.

The attractions of the Divine Carnival rose out of the dust like creatures from forgotten tales. A Ferris wheel, bright and dark at once, turned with a hypnotic rhythm, its ornate cabins promising to carry the curious on a journey of revelations and nightmares. A giant snail, its shell gleaming in iridescent colors, was surrounded by a silent, listening crowd. Clara caught fragments of its voice, a deep whisper: “Everything you long for has an echo, and every echo has its price.”

At the corner of the square, a jester with an enigmatic face was preparing to tell his stories. His laughter rang out like a subtle echo of madness, and though his smile was wide, his eyes were dark abysses that seemed to swallow the light. Clara drew closer, drawn by the promise of unveiling the secrets the fair whispered, though some wiser part of her warned that what might be revealed could be more disturbing than fascinating.

As the crowd pressed in around her, Clara felt her heart pound. Her curiosity, the one thing she had never been able to resist, pulled her toward the center of that whirlwind of lights and shadows. “What kind of fair is this?” she wondered, feeling a shiver run down her back.

When the first bell tolled through the air, an uneasy silence fell over the place. It was at that moment the fair’s elements seemed to come alive. The flickering lights transformed into fallen stars, each one ready to tell its story, each one trapped under the spell of the place. Clara understood that every shadow around her carried a weight, a past that could be as beautiful as it was terrifying.

Before she could stop to think, her feet carried her toward the heart of the fair, where an ancient mirror, framed in gold that gleamed with an unsettling glow, seemed to call to her. “Reflections of the divine, fears of the human”—a soft voice, laced with irony, resonated through the air. Clara stopped, hypnotized, and leaned in. In its surface she saw not only her own face, but a labyrinth of distorted memories, each more terrifying than the last.

With every step she took, the border between reality and the world of dreams grew thinner. Clara, caught in the riddle of San Lúcido, had no idea that her arrival would be the prelude to a journey that would reveal disturbing truths about her own life. A choice awaited her, and time—that old friend of every terror—was already moving against her.

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