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David

"Wow what a beautiful story. For a short story this one is beautifully written. I love the relationship between David and his father and how Nathan became a part of it as his relationship with David began to grow. From sadness to sweet and cute this story has a range of emotions. Wonderful job author. 💞🩷💞"

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David

"I love this story. You've managed to convey so much in just a few chapters, getting to know someone, love, sensitivity, the pain of saying goodbye forever, and a happy ending. Very well written. "

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DAVID ❤️💔

"@MichaelBN you have written a very emotional, but beautiful story about grief, love and finding a way to move on after losing someone. David is a wonderful story with amazing characters, a story I highly recommend to everyone on Inkitt. Nathan is attracted to David instantly when David accidentally walks into Nathan’s office. Nathan’s tuff CEO facade falls instantly when he sees the young handsome David standing there. While David is an emotional, and overworked mess, caring for his father, and struggling to pay their bills, but meeting Nathan has made all that stress and worry more bearable. Brilliant story, absolutely love it.❤️❤️ "

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Beautiful

"Wow this was such a sweet and beautiful short story. So sad but so beautiful. Definitely worth the read. I know i absolutely loved it"

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Love this fast little read.

"This one zoomed by in a good way. The writer put together a fast paced story that zips right alone. It's clean, sharp, and has a happy ending. I do so love a happy ending. :)"

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