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Ismene

"Sweet, short story. The author has a wonderful ability to convey a scene with very few words, making excellent use of vocabulary. I would have liked a little more expansion on whose footprints were outside the window. Who was watching them? I was expecting a twist. Lovely ending. I could literally see it in my mind! "

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