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When you see me

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Summary

He wanted her from the first glance. She didn't choose him-but somehow, she'll have to find herself within his world. Altan Demirhan falls in love with Sarayah Siddique the moment he sees her. He wants her completely, decisively, and without hesitation. To him, wanting is enough. Waiting is proof. Control is care. Sarayah is a simple girl with simple dreams, unprepared for the world of wealth, power, and quiet dominance she is pulled into when she becomes his wife. She barely knows the man she marries-and never realizes that the life surrounding her has been shaped by him long before she had a choice in it. As devotion begins to feel heavier than safety, and patience starts to resemble something far more dangerous. Sarayah must confront an unsettling question: can love be chosen after it has already claimed you? When You See Me is a dark, morally complex romance about the thin line between protection and possession-and whether love can be real when it was never freely given.

Genre
Romance
Author
Debeh
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Chapter One

Altan Demirhan stood before the glass wall of his Hamptons residence, the land falling away beneath him in disciplined layers of green. Wooded hills rolled downward in controlled silence, their density thinning as they reached the water — a wide, dark stretch that reflected light without ever revealing depth.

There were no neighboring houses in view, no signs of intrusion. Just land, water, and distance, arranged as if they existed solely to buffer him from the rest of the world. The room behind him was vast and restrained, its materials chosen for permanence rather than comfort. This wasn't a view meant to inspire rest. It was meant to remind him how far removed he was — and how intentionally.

His phone buzzed on the granite island behind him. He didn't turn.

"Sir." Ada's voice carried across the open space with the precision of a woman who'd learned to read his moods from fifteen feet away. "The car's ready. Flight departs in ninety minutes."

He took another sip, let the whiskey burn down his throat. "Udaipur?"

"Yes, sir. I've sent the summit briefing to your tablet. Three days, four keynote addresses, twelve private meetings. The hotel confirmed your suite this morning."

Altan finally turned. Ada Khan stood near the coffee table—a sleek silhouette in charcoal gray, tablet in hand, expression neutral. She'd been his executive secretary for six years. In that time, she'd anticipated his needs before he voiced them, managed crises he never saw coming, and also became a close confidant.

He valued that last part most.

"What's the agenda look like?"

Ada's fingers moved across the screen. "Day one: opening keynote at nine, panel discussion at two, private dinner with the Minister of Electronics and IT at seven. Day two—"

"Skip to the parts that matter."

"Day two: closed-door sessions with potential acquisition targets. Aksen Intelligence is interested in two AI startups based in Bangalore. Omar's already vetted their financials. Day three: your closing address, then you're clear."

Three days of predictable conversations with predictable people asking predictable questions. What's next for Aksen? How do you see the future of cloud computing? What advice do you have for young entrepreneurs?

The same script. Different city.

"Tell me about the hotel," he said, finishing the whiskey.

"The Leela Palace. Lakeside property, private wing reserved for summit attendees. Your suite overlooks Lake Pichola. Security's been briefed. I'll have a workspace set up before you arrive."

"Good." He set the glass down and reached for his jacket—Tom Ford, charcoal, tailored so precisely it might as well have been a second skin. "Anything else?"

Ada hesitated.

Altan noticed. He always noticed.

"What?"

"There's a wedding at the hotel this weekend. One of our employees—Rajesh Sharma, VP of Aksen Systems India. His daughter."

"And?"

"You were invited. I sent regrets on your behalf two months ago, but..." She paused, choosing her words carefully. "Mr. Sharma has been with the company for twenty years. He's loyal. Competent. It might be... appropriate to make a brief appearance."

Altan's jaw tightened. He didn't do weddings. Didn't do family events. Didn't do anything that required him to smile through manufactured joy while strangers made small talk about his personal life.

"How brief?"

"An hour. Less, if you'd like. The sangeet is Friday evening. You could attend, pay your respects, leave before dinner."

He studied her. Ada's face remained impassive, but there was something else there—calculation. She knew he'd be bored out of his mind by day two of the summit. She knew he'd be looking for an exit.

"Fine," he said. "One hour. No more."

"Of course, sir."

She turned to leave, heels clicking against the marble, but stopped at the door. "Sir, there's one more thing."

"What?"

"The board met yesterday. Informally."

Altan's expression didn't change, but his focus sharpened. "And?"

"Succession came up. Again."

Of course it did. It always did.

"What did they say?"

Ada's voice was carefully neutral. "They're concerned. You're thirty. Unmarried. No children. No clear plan for—"

"I'm aware of what concerns them." His voice was cold enough to frost glass. "Tell them I'll address it when there's something to address."

"Yes, sir."

She left.

Altan stood in the silence she left behind, his reflection staring back at him from the dark window. Thirty years old. Chairman of Aksen Group—a conglomerate spanning cloud infrastructure, artificial intelligence, venture capital, and luxury goods. A hundred and seventy-two billion dollars in net worth. Offices in fourteen countries. Properties on four continents.

And not a single person waiting for him when he came home.

The memory surfaced before he could stop it.

His mother, two months before the cancer took her, sitting in the hospital bed with that strange clarity dying people sometimes got. Her hand in his, paper-thin and cold.

"You'll know when you see her, Altan."

He'd smiled—tired, indulgent. "Know what, mother ?"

"The one." Her grip tightened. "The woman meant for you. You won't have to wonder. You won't have to guess. You'll just... know."

"That's not how the world works."

"Maybe not your world." She'd touched his face, her thumb brushing his cheek. "But it's how love works. I knew with your father. The moment I saw him. Everything else—the logic, the planning, the reason—none of it mattered."

"You were nineteen."

"I was right."

He'd kissed her forehead, changed the subject. Three weeks later, she was gone.

Eighteen months after that, his father followed—a heart attack in his study, sudden and brutal. The doctors said it was coronary disease. Altan knew better.

His father had loved his mother too much to live without her.

Altan shook the thought away and headed for the elevator.

The drive to Teterboro was forty minutes. Ada worked silently beside him in the backseat, stylus moving across her tablet, managing the controlled chaos of his schedule. His phone buzzed intermittently—emails, messages, alerts he'd read and respond to once they were airborne.

Omar was waiting at the jet when they arrived.

Omar Haddad—Director of Strategic Acquisitions, Jordanian by heritage, American by passport, ruthless by necessity. He'd been with Aksen for eight years, ever since Altan had poached him from a rival firm with an offer he couldn't refuse. Dark-eyed, sharp-featured, impeccably dressed, Omar had a talent for identifying undervalued companies and a stomach for the kind of hostile negotiations that made weaker men sweat.

"Everything's set," Omar said as Altan climbed the jet's stairs. "I'll meet you in Udaipur tomorrow afternoon. The Bangalore meetings are confirmed for day two."

"Good. What's the total outlay?"

"For both acquisitions? Hundred and forty million. Give or take."

"That's a rounding error."

Omar smiled—thin, predatory. "That's why I like working for you."

Altan settled into the leather seat as the flight attendant offered coffee. He waved her off. "Anything else I should know?"

"Board's restless."

"I heard."

"They want a succession plan. An heir. Someone who can take over if—"

"If I die in a plane crash?" Altan's voice was flat. "Tell them I'm working on it."

"Are you?"

Altan didn't answer. Omar knew better than to push.

The jet's engines roared to life. Fourteen hours to Udaipur. Altan opened his laptop and lost himself in work—emails, reports, projections. Numbers were clean. Predictable. They didn't ask questions or demand explanations. They simply were.

By the time they landed, dawn was breaking over Rajasthan.

The Leela Palace was everything Ada had promised—white marble, manicured gardens, Lake Pichola glittering in the early light. Altan's suite occupied the top floor of the private wing: two bedrooms, a study, a terrace overlooking the water.

He unpacked nothing. A butler—silent, efficient, invisible—hung his suits while Altan showered and changed.

The summit began at nine.

It was exactly as tedious as he'd expected.

Panels on digital infrastructure. Keynotes on AI ethics. Networking sessions where men in expensive suits circled each other like sharks, looking for leverage. Altan delivered his opening address with the same clinical precision he brought to board meetings—clear, authoritative, utterly devoid of warmth.

Afterward, a parade of people wanted his attention. Entrepreneurs pitching half-baked ideas. Journalists fishing for soundbites. Government officials angling for partnerships.

Ada intercepted most of them. The ones she couldn't, Altan dispatched in under sixty seconds.

By afternoon , he was back in his suite, staring at the lake, wondering why he'd bothered coming.

His phone buzzed. Ada.

Wedding sangeet begins at 4 PM. Ground floor, lakeside pavilion. Car ready when you are.

He checked his watch. Three forty-five.

For a moment, he considered skipping it. One hour of smiling through someone else's celebration sounded unbearable. But Rajesh Sharma had been with Aksen for two decades. Loyal. Competent. The kind of employee who deserved acknowledgment.

Altan changed into a black shimmering sherwani ,something Ada had chosen especially for the event—and headed downstairs.

The sangeet met him with a wall of sound—a percussive, joyful chaos that felt like a physical assault after the silence of his suite.

The lakeside pavilion had been transformed into something out of a fever dream—strings of marigolds, lanterns casting golden light, a stage where musicians played something loud and rhythmic. Women in jewel-toned saris, men in embroidered sherwanis, children darting between tables.

It was chaos.

Altan hated chaos.

A staff member intercepted him immediately. "Mr. Demirhan, welcome. Please, this way."

He was led to a corner table—slightly removed, visible enough to be polite, far enough to avoid conversation. A waiter appeared with champagne. Altan accepted it, scanned the crowd.

Rajesh Sharma was near the stage, beaming with pride. Altan would find him later, offer congratulations, leave.

One hour. That's all this required.

He checked his watch. Four fifty-three.

The music shifted—faster, more energetic. Women flooded the dance floor, moving in synchrony, laughing. The crowd erupted in applause.

Altan took a sip of champagne, already planning his exit.

He stood, ready to leave, when the sound cut through everything else.

Laughter.

Not the polite, performative kind that floated through gatherings like this—calculated and careful. This was different. Unguarded. Real. It rang out above the music, bright and unrestrained, tangled with the softer giggles of other women and the delicate chime of anklets.

Altan stopped mid-step.

He turned toward the sound, scanning the crowd. At first, there was only movement—a blur of color and bodies shifting near the edge of the dance floor. Then he saw it: a flash of yellow, plain and vivid against the jewel tones surrounding it.

His body moved before his mind consented, drawn across the pavilion as if pulled by a wire tied behind his ribs.

The crowd parted just enough, and she came into focus.

A woman in a saree the color of summer sunlight—lemon-yellow, simple, no embroidery, no embellishment. The kind of fabric that had been worn before. Many times. The pleats were slightly uneven at the waist, the pallu draped with the practicality of someone who'd learned to manage six yards of cloth without a mirror.

Her blouse was old-fashioned, modest—three-quarter sleeves in sheer mesh that let her skin glow through, warm and golden in the lantern light. No designer cuts. No modern flourishes. Just fabric and function.

But it was her body that made him forget to breathe.

She wasn't tall. Wasn't modelesque. But she moved with an ease that suggested she'd never questioned the shape she occupied. Medium frame, soft curves that the saree followed like water—rounding over her hips, dipping at a waist so narrow it looked almost fragile. Her midriff was bare, lean and supple, the skin there pale against the warm light, stretched taut over the subtle definition of muscle and bone.

She turned, laughing at something someone said, and the movement sent her hair swinging—a thick, glossy cascade of chestnut and honey-brown that caught the light like silk. It wasn't styled. Just long, loose, alive with the kind of natural wave that moved when she moved, framing her face in a halo of warmth.

And then he saw her face.

Altan felt his heart do something it had never done before.

It stopped.

Just for a second. Just long enough to make him question whether he was still standing.

She had the kind of face that belonged in paintings. Not the modern, angular kind—something older. Classical. The architecture of her features was almost unsettling in its symmetry: high cheekbones that curved like sculptures, a jawline refined and clean, a nose straight and delicate.

Her eyes were enormous—warm, molten hazel, framed by dark brows so perfectly shaped they looked drawn by an artist's hand. There was intelligence there. Softness. Something unguarded that made his chest tighten.

Her lips were full, stained a soft petal-pink—natural or cosmetic, he couldn't tell, didn't care. They were parted slightly in laughter, and the sound of it was still echoing in his ears even though she'd stopped.

Her jewelry was nothing. Steel jhumkas swaying at her ears, thin bangles on her wrists that clinked when she gestured. No gold. No diamonds. No heavy necklaces weighing down her throat.

She didn't need them.

She was luminous without them.

Around her, women glittered in silk and stones worth more than cars. But she—dressed in a reworn saree and borrowed earrings—was the only one Altan could see.

The music swelled. She turned again, laughing, and the sheer sleeve of her blouse shifted just enough to reveal the curve of her shoulder, the elegant line of her collarbone.

His hands tightened into fists at his sides.

He wanted to touch her.

He wanted to know her name.

He wanted to hear that laugh again, directed at him, meant for him.

His mother's voice whispered through his mind, soft and certain: You'll know when you see her, Altan. You'll just know.

He knew.

The world had narrowed to this: a woman in yellow, laughing in a crowd, completely unaware that she'd just become the axis around which his entire life would turn.

She disappeared into the crowd before he could move. He stood, scanning for yellow, for that particular shade of hair, for her.

Nothing.

The dancers had dispersed. The music shifted to something slower. People were talking, laughing, moving toward the buffet.

Altan's pulse was a drumbeat in his ears.

He set the champagne down and walked toward the crowd.

He had to find her.

He had to know her name.

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