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Torment [Coming This November]

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[cover by Araphelarts] Freya Bell, while only seventeen has always had trouble fitting in a minor Northern Sector known as Fyri. So when her old nan finally kicks the bucket, the only thing left is to pack up her meager belongings and move in with her older sister Nadia who resides in a small town by the name Westen, located at the center of the Southern Cities. A place of high ranking government officials who have way too much time on their, busy with the destruction and eradication of the lower populations. She finds that nothing could ever cure her hatred for the outrageously rich bastards here in Westen that is until she meets Strid Beadu. Strid Beadu thought he had everything he could ever need for the son of a high ranking general. The looks, money, and even the young ladies who never seemed to take their eyes off him. That is until he meets Freya Bell. She's not like all the rich girls he's grown up with. Especially not like the spoiled brat he's been engaged to since he was six years old. At the command of his father. Strid knows he must not take a bite of the forbidden fruit. But when trouble stirs up in downtown Westen, his decision to stay away from Freya, may no longer be in his power to do so. As for Freya, who would love to finish school, and return to Fyri without a hitch, she'll find that learning to love the enemy, isn't the worst thing out there. Find out what happens on their long, complicated journey, in this novel Torment, and learn that the things around you aren't always what they seem.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Copyright & Author's Note

Copyright 2026 Promise Trujillo All rights reserved.

No parts of this publication may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in any shape or form or by any means, including photocopying, recording or any other electronic or mechanical methods, without the prior written permission of the publisher.

This is a work of fiction, any names or places mentioned are the pure imagination of the author.

Hello, Books_With_Promise here, so, a little short story time. Long ago, before Renascence was what it is today, I work on a story by the name Torment. A Dystopian Fantasy Romance, and the very first story I've ever written. While it was originally co-written, and the person I worked on it is no longer a part of my life, I've since changed genres for the story, changed names, and cut many prominent characters that never made it to the current draft or newer plotline for Renascence. All that was created by me was kept and all written by him has since been completely removed.

However, due to the curiosity, of a friend, and now long-time cover creator, Guinealove2005, I've decided to release the old version, with names, again changed, and some characters replaced as the ones being replaced did not belong to me. I do wish you all the enjoyment of this version of the story, while meeting characters never before met prior to this. Thank you, my many readers, for the support.

P.S. I hope you're all ready for this when it arrives in November. I know, it's a pain to wait for, but well worth it. I assure you.

P.S.S. My old friend, who I wish well, you were indeed right Death, War and I didn't last. Too bad I am unable to see you again to hear you say the words, "I told you so."

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