DREAMS , LOVE AND REALITY

"I really enjoyed this chapter—the narration feels genuine and relatable, and Riley’s overthinking made her easy to connect with while the ending left me wanting to know what happens next. One thing that could make it even stronger is adding a few more sensory details and a little more interaction with Dennis to deepen their first meeting and make the emotional impact even greater. I enjoyed this chapter because Riley’s thoughts and emotions feel honest and relatable, making it easy to understand how a simple crush slowly grew into something deeper. To make it even stronger, you could add a little more dialogue and sensory detail during Riley and Dennis’s interaction to make their connection feel even more memorable. "