Cute but the writing

"With this story, I wondered if it is AI, but the authors profile does not seem like it. The abudance of short factual sentences that remind of lists being written does not give a very good writing flow. This is typical for AI work thus my impression. I think with a bit work on that it would improve a lot because the writing overall is stable and the work has a good foundation. The story is cute and I like the characters. "