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This is a great story

"As you read this you will find I a bit confusing at first. Just keep at it and you’ll see where it’s going. It’s about trust and trusting that the other person will not jump in front of you and take your power away. That the person will respect you enough to stand with you and trust you can be who you are. Great story and looking forward to the rest in the series."

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Love this series!

"Writing a story using someone's point of view is a great skill. This opens up the readers viewpoint and provides insight into each characters thoughts. Well done!"

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Great wroting

"good conversation Great writing,"

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