What is your opinion?
Hooking story
"This isn't the first book I will read of this author and I will say every one of her books are absolutely beautiful. I am enjoying this summer book so much already and I can't wait to see what happens next 😍 thank you author! Keep writing please🥰"
I grew ovaries and they busted
"This is getting spicy, you already got me with Italian racer man. They go well for thick babes, which Maya is so extremely hot. An a rival is brewing, I CANT TAKE IT!!! Don't know if this is your cup of tea, but please review my baby. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1806042 Tales of Misfits: Welcome to the Triangle Little Rabbit"
MY DANGEROUS SUMMER
"This was a warm and emotional opening that immediately made me care about Maya and her relationship with her father, and the dialogue felt natural and heartfelt. To make it even stronger, consider trimming a few repetitive descriptions and adding a stronger hook or hint of the central conflict near the end of the chapter to leave readers even more eager to continue."
