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Don't Make a Sound

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Summary

Fifteen people enter the house, but how many will leave with their sight? When Denny, his nine friends, and his five younger siblings get trapped inside an abandoned mansion, they expect creepy rumors—not reality. There are no ghosts or supernatural monsters haunting these dark halls. The threats here are entirely human, and they carry rusted iron needles and heavy black thread to sew their victims' eyes shut. With four young children to protect, the teens must navigate a maze of pure terror before the silent cult members trap them in the shadows. When the exits slam shut, Denny has to make a choice: lose everything, or launch a desperate, blind revolution to lead his family back out into the light. A high-stakes psychological survival thriller about ultimate loyalty and facing your darkest fears. Written by Author Fairy.

Status
Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter One: The Last Normal Week

The antique grandfather clock in the corner of the bookshop didn’t tick. It hissed, its heavy brass pendulum slicing through the quiet evening air.

Denny smiled warmly, adjusting a stack of old, leather-bound novels on the mahogany counter. “Please don’t say that, sir. I am only here because of your kindness. But I need to request a few holidays to see my family and clear my head. I truly hope you are not upset with me.”

His boss, Mr. Abernathy—an elderly, sharp-minded man who treated Denny more like a son than an assistant—waved his hand dismissively with a soft chuckle. “Upset? Of course not, my boy! If I had five more workers like you, I could retire tomorrow. You work harder than anyone else in this noisy city. Take all the time you need.”

Mr. Abernathy trusted Denny completely. In fact, he trusted him so much that he handed over his only spare set of keys, allowing Denny to stay late into the night to browse the shop’s private archives.

It was during one of those quiet, solitary nights, surrounded by the scent of aged paper and ink, that Denny accidentally uncovered a dust-covered maritime logbook. As he flipped through the yellowed pages, his eyes locked onto a hand-drawn map of a place omitted from modern navigation charts: The Sightless Island. A dark, forbidden history was scratched into the margins, hinting at secrets that made the hairs on Denny’s arms stand up.

Excited to show his father—a man who had always shared his love for old maritime folklore—Denny locked up the bookstore and walked home under the cold city lights, his heart exceptionally light.

But the moment he pushed his front door open, an icy chill washed over him.

The house was drowned in a heavy, unnatural silence.

“Mom? David?” Denny called out, stepping into the dark living room. His heart dropped into his stomach.

His younger siblings were standing completely still, huddled tightly together in front of the fireplace mantelpiece. Their eyes were red, swollen, and wet with fresh tears. Terrified, Denny bypassed them, sprinting toward his mother, who was drifting through the room like a ghost toward a framed picture of his father.

He grabbed her arm gently, his voice trembling. “Mom, what happened? Where is Dad?”

His mother turned to him slowly. Her eyes were blank, hollow, and entirely devoid of light. She slowly raised a single, shivering finger to her lips. “Shh... your dad is sleeping.”

Denny looked from his mother’s tragic, pale face back to the framed photo on the mantelpiece. The crushing weight of reality hit him all at once. The illusion shattered. His father wasn’t sleeping upstairs.

His father was gone.

“No! Dad can’t go like that!” Denny shouted, his refined politeness completely vanishing into pure, raw agony.

Blinded by overwhelming grief, he bolted down the hallway. The heavy soles of his shoes echoed like thunder cracks through the silent house. His younger brother, David, ran desperately after him, calling his name, but Denny wouldn’t stop.

He burst through the heavy wooden door of his father’s private study. Denny pointed a shaking, trembling hand at the empty desk chair. “Dad is right here!” he screamed at his brother, his mind rejecting the trauma. “He’s sitting right there in his chair! He’s reading his book!”

David caught up to him, grabbing Denny’s shoulders with a firm, heartbreaking grip. Tears streamed freely down David’s face. “Dad is not here, Denny,” he said, his voice cracking but steady. “Dad is gone.”

The final defense in Denny’s mind collapsed. He broke into a flood of tears, sinking to his knees as the weight of the truth finally crushed him. “No... why didn’t anyone tell me?” he sobbed, burying his face in his hands. David wrapped his arms tightly around his older brother, holding him up as Denny wept against his shoulder in the quiet, shadowed study.

A few minutes later, David left the room briefly and returned carrying a small plate of food. He offered it to Denny, trying to stay strong for the family, but Denny just shook his head. His throat felt far too tight to swallow even a single bite.

David set the plate down on the desk, sitting beside his brother on the floor. He placed a comforting hand on Denny’s trembling shoulder.

“Denny, please, you have to take care of yourself,” David said softly, wiping a stray tear from his own cheek. “If you break down like this, how can we take care of Mom and the little ones?” David paused, taking a deep, shaky breath before continuing. “I called your friends. They are already on their way here tonight.”

Denny stared blankly at the floorboards. His friends—the tight-knit group he had grown up with, including Marcus, Chloe, Maya, and the others—were coming to support him on the darkest night of his life.

But as Denny’s eyes drifted back to his father’s empty desk, he noticed something strange. Tucked neatly under the keyboard was a single, freshly torn page from the bookstore’s forbidden maritime logbook.

Written across the top in his father’s unmistakable handwriting were three words: They found me. And right below it, underlined in thick black ink, was a coordinate leading straight back to the Sightless Island.

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What a story. Loved it. Keep it up. Will be waiting for another bóok

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