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Great Story

"Very fun to read. I loved the feeling of old world living with modern tech. Good strong characters that keep you reading."

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Where Ancient Meets Technology

"She is hidden away and mostly unappreciated but becomes the pin that once removed causes total collapse. Love the play of light and dark within the characters it gives them great depth and makes them so interesting. It has a smooth blend of ancient mixed with technology, very balanced."

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Brilliant

"Would like to see the story continue. Where will this relationship/partnership go? I'd like to see what happens to Iron claw."

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Fantastic

"I am finding myself very impatient as I wait for new chapters. So far, this book is a wonderful find. "

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Review from start of book thru this chapter

"Characters are clearly defined with strengths and weaknesses. Motives for behavior are delineated and consistent. I cannot wait for more chapters. One question i have is what happened to the laundry women who were suppsed to wait for 3 bangs on the pipes. Will this be addressed in the upcoming chapters?"

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