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Behind the Pier Glass

"Lovely story of a hard fought first love. The writer does a beautiful job of conveying the vulnerability, anticipation and determination of the main character. "

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Behind the pier glass

"A fascinating story, the reader can wallow in the developing love between Benedict and Arthur. The frisson of potential discovery makes every private moment together glow. The chapter on the "documentary" suggests the idyll has an ending of some sort, but the tension keeps me reading."

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