What is your opinion?
A Horrible Journey Indeed!
"Alright, let me just say, the story took a completely unexpected turn compared to what I anticipated based on the initial summary. A camping trip takes a terrifying turn into a fight for survival for the protagonists, Alex, Alice, Charlie, and Jack. I expected it to be a horror-thriller, somewhat like a mix of The Cabin in the Woods and Friday the 13th, since they were going on a camping trip. However, as events began to unfold with the story's protagonists, it led me to suspect the presence of a paranormal element. The twist in the later chapters was truly shocking, revealing that the events unfolding, and everything bad that happened with the protagonists, were neither accidental nor paranormal, but something entirely unexpected. The story took an intriguing turn with the surprising revelation that the old man in the cave was, in fact, Alex's father. However, I couldn't help but feel that the use of the name "Mary," being so common, diminished the impact slightly. Perhaps opting for a more distinctive name or using the full name could have made the old man's reaction even more compelling. My only concern with the story lies not in the plot but in the writing itself. As I mentioned in the first chapter, I recommend breaking up the paragraphs to clearly distinguish each scene or conversation. This would help emphasize key moments and prevent the plot from becoming muddled. Overall, the story was undoubtedly an engaging read. Wishing you all the best, and I eagerly look forward to exploring your other works! Mia Vita!"
Wonderful ☺️
"You have a wonderful writing style, even though this is one of your early books. It is clear and easy to follow—excellent, in my opinion. For some reason, Alex was my favorite character. Don't ever stop writing; best of luck.☺️👏☘️❤️"
