What is your opinion?
Fariss
"A very heartwarming book. The writing style is pretty much good. Deserves more reads"
Gripping
"I have only read the first chapter so far. But I hope to get back to finishing off the rest of the story. I found the first chapter very gripping. I could very much relate to the main protagonist, simply because in my own way I have been where he's been. Well similar, nto exactly alike. But I can relate and that is the most important thing. The writing is most excelent. Good story development and good characterisation and I dfinitely will look forward to finishing reading teh rest of teh story, as soon as I am able to do so."
Review
"Really liked Faris! The story of a determined poor boy fighting to escape poverty through education felt genuine and inspiring. His sharp mind and the struggles he faces with his mother’s hard work make it emotional and easy to root for. A solid, complete short read that hits the right notes."
Well written story
"As a person who has concerns for its own ambitions, this sory is definitely a good pick . A great attraction for ambition driven souls 👏"
A great story!
"Everything. I liked the whole story. I chose this rating because I liked the story and the way it was written. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes emotional stories."
A lovely story
"A great and well written story I really enjoy 👍"
A great book
"It's a great quick read. I enjoyed it so far! This Author is very talented."
rooting for faris
"just read the first chapters. man, faris has it rough. the stuff with his dad and his mom working so hard hits pretty heavy. really hope he gets a win soon with that eagle company thing. dropped you a 5 star, keep it up!"
Cool
"Wow this is so good👍 What a good plot it is "
Very moving story! 👏
"Lots of emotion. Would 100% recommend to anyone who wars a story filled with emotion and realiseation"
A great story that I truly enjoyed :)
"I really enjoyed reading your story as it was truly realistic! It had a very satisfying ending and great character development for Faris as he finally realised that wealth isn't everything, although it is important. To me, it serves as a reminder that we should treasure what we have while we still have it and still prove others wrong despite the difficulties in your life. The story was well-structured as the chapters remained suspenseful each time and had a few unexpected plot twists (although I didn't have to wait to find out as I read it all now, it was still very well-written and would have caused me to return each time a new chapter was submitted)! The only reason why I rated the technical writing skills 4 stars was because at times, I think it was mainly chapter 2 or 3 but I'm not sure, there was missing punctuation for some of the dialogue or sentences, but they were minor errors that didn't really impact my reading. I'm sure any other stories you write will be just as amazing! "
AMAZING absolutely fabulous one of the best novels I've read on hear please keep making work this good you work inspires me keep going im rooting for you <3
"I loved everything in this book the writing the style the plot and just the idea itself absolutely wonderful keep doing what your doing"
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"I really liked the author's writing style.The fact that world is a brutal place and faris had to face the betrayal but he didn't lost hope and kept on going.His mother's character was so sweet.Overall the story was so good "
A great read!
"I enjoyed this greatly! At first I thought the turnaround was a bit fast for The Eagle Company, but in our modern age these things happen on a dime! It was great, never more or less than it needed to be. Big fan!"
Well written story!
"The story is raw and emotional. Very beautifully explained. It took into the life of Faris and I was walking along with him in the story. Very nice!"
ABSOLUTE CINEMA
"This is the best story i have read so far, this is my favourite now and can't wait to read the next chapter. The writing style is ABSOLUTE CINEMA just like i am in the story , only some writers have this kind of talent to make the reader think like he is in the story and he is one of them . "
A great read
"This story completely surprised me in the best way. The Characters feel so real, and faris quickly became someone I couldn't help rooting for. Watching him struggle through everything life throws at him while still triyng to bulid a better future is both heartbreaking and inspiring. The emotional scenes hit hard, but the lighter moments keep the story balanced. I especially love how each chapter reveals a little more about the characthers without feeling rushed. the writting is easy to follow, the pacing is great, and every chapter leaves me wanting to read the next one."
An Ending That Left Me Smiling
"It was beautiful and had a heartwarming ending. My only issue with the story was the final chapter. Although it was one of the most beautiful chapters, everything happened much more quickly compared to the rest of the story. By the time I reached Chapter 10, I found myself wondering how everything could possibly be wrapped up in just one more chapter. Even so, this didn't take away from the story's impact or beauty at all. Overall, it was a truly beautiful and memorable story."
Faris
"No one needs to tell twenty-year-old Faris what poverty is all about. His mother can only afford to give him roti in curry for every meal. She cleans in other people's houses for a living, while his father is busy wrecking the family's finances through his drug addiction. Faris has a job in a Mobile Repair and Photocopy shop, but it is not enough to pay for his wealthy university and so he goes on scholarship. Even at his college the other students tease and bully poor Faris for his lack of wealth. Then comes the day when the Eagle Company a powerful tech corporation makes a mysterious phone call to Faris. Later the company offers him a job as they have taken such a strong interest in this exceptionally gifted young programmer. But is the company to be trusted? Are they perhaps involved in some nefarious illegal activity. Faris doesn't know and doesn't care. All he is sure of that the Eagle Corporation might have at last given him his wings to soar to fame and fortune. White Rose the author is not fearful to tell the story of her strong-willed protagonist, because Faris, will not take nonsense from anyone believe me. And you can feel his frustration at the world that tells him that he is nothing but a sewer rat, It makes you want to root for the guy. I'm on Chapter Four now. (Ignore the above chapter counter. It's rarely accurate.) So I don't know the true intentions of the Eagle Corporation yet. But here's hoping for some happiness for Faris ...and maybe just a little revenge on his bullies too. "
Great 😃👍
"I absolutely love your writing style; it is an excellent book in terms of its subject matter. "
