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Well written story!
"The story is raw and emotional. Very beautifully explained. It took into the life of Faris and I was walking along with him in the story. Very nice!"
ABSOLUTE CINEMA
"This is the best story i have read so far, this is my favourite now and can't wait to read the next chapter. The writing style is ABSOLUTE CINEMA just like i am in the story , only some writers have this kind of talent to make the reader think like he is in the story and he is one of them . "
A great read
"This story completely surprised me in the best way. The Characters feel so real, and faris quickly became someone I couldn't help rooting for. Watching him struggle through everything life throws at him while still triyng to bulid a better future is both heartbreaking and inspiring. The emotional scenes hit hard, but the lighter moments keep the story balanced. I especially love how each chapter reveals a little more about the characthers without feeling rushed. the writting is easy to follow, the pacing is great, and every chapter leaves me wanting to read the next one."
An Ending That Left Me Smiling
"It was beautiful and had a heartwarming ending. My only issue with the story was the final chapter. Although it was one of the most beautiful chapters, everything happened much more quickly compared to the rest of the story. By the time I reached Chapter 10, I found myself wondering how everything could possibly be wrapped up in just one more chapter. Even so, this didn't take away from the story's impact or beauty at all. Overall, it was a truly beautiful and memorable story."
Faris
"No one needs to tell twenty-year-old Faris what poverty is all about. His mother can only afford to give him roti in curry for every meal. She cleans in other people's houses for a living, while his father is busy wrecking the family's finances through his drug addiction. Faris has a job in a Mobile Repair and Photocopy shop, but it is not enough to pay for his wealthy university and so he goes on scholarship. Even at his college the other students tease and bully poor Faris for his lack of wealth. Then comes the day when the Eagle Company a powerful tech corporation makes a mysterious phone call to Faris. Later the company offers him a job as they have taken such a strong interest in this exceptionally gifted young programmer. But is the company to be trusted? Are they perhaps involved in some nefarious illegal activity. Faris doesn't know and doesn't care. All he is sure of that the Eagle Corporation might have at last given him his wings to soar to fame and fortune. White Rose the author is not fearful to tell the story of her strong-willed protagonist, because Faris, will not take nonsense from anyone believe me. And you can feel his frustration at the world that tells him that he is nothing but a sewer rat, It makes you want to root for the guy. I'm on Chapter Four now. (Ignore the above chapter counter. It's rarely accurate.) So I don't know the true intentions of the Eagle Corporation yet. But here's hoping for some happiness for Faris ...and maybe just a little revenge on his bullies too. "
Great 😃👍
"I absolutely love your writing style; it is an excellent book in terms of its subject matter. "
Good Read
"This book was a very interesting and emotional read. I really enjoyed the twists and turns throughout the story, which kept me engaged and wanting to know what would happen next. Overall, it was a great read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. "
Emotional
"This story has a lot of potential i like forward for us meeting someday "
Finished it in one sitting!
"This story was so enjoyable I finished it in one sitting! The plot is typical - a boy striving to lift himself and his mother out of poverty, but it is the kind of story that you need when you want a bit of relaxation from the stress you encounter in life. No complex plots. Simple, straightforward storytelling. Naturally, I would like to recommend a more intricate plot next time, although overall, it was a good story. "
pretty decent!
"I really enjoyed this! I read the whole book in one thing! I really hope you continue with this writing style and theme, you really seem to be good at this! Some chapters really blend into each other though, I hope you can improve on that. Besides the chapters blending in, I think their quite short-which is more of a me problem, you can write however long or short you want. Anyway, continue writing things like this! "
Review by Lively.blossoms
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Review of the novel Farris
"Hi! 😊I’ve kept my promise and read through your entire novel. I actually think the core idea is really good: a poor underdog and outsider rising from the absolute bottom to become a wealthy tech billionaire is a classic, exciting concept! Unfortunately, the story had far too many illogical plot points for me and leaned heavily into unrealistic clichés. Here are a few examples that stood out to me the most:The "gifted boy" cliché & missing mentors:As a reader, we never see how exactly Faris became so talented or where this gift even came from. It's just there from second one. No ordinary young man becomes an absolute genius without any notable help—especially not with a drug-addicted father and an overwhelmed mother. Having a mentor figure in the story—essentially a "Dr. Dre" for Faris, or a family friend/uncle who taught him the ropes in the first place (similar to what Marshall Mathers' uncle did for him)—would have done wonders for the book! It would have made Faris' success genuinely believable.Faris never comes across as likeable or intelligent:Unfortunately, Faris never really feels like a smart or likeable guy throughout the novel. He is constantly rude and aggressive. Instead of showing his genius through logical actions, he mostly spends his time yelling and throwing around technical jargon that no normal human being understands. This makes it very difficult for the reader to empathize with him at all.The highly unrealistic behavior of the company:The way The Eagle Company behaves is, unfortunately, completely illogical. They just randomly call a stranger who is a college student in the middle of the night. How do they know who he is? What exactly do they want from him? Why are they calling him of all people? This is never explained. It would have been incredible if this had been handled more like the movie Wall Street: the tech CEO could have been a sort of "evil version of Steve Jobs"—a toxic mentor who nurtures Faris' talent but pushes him toward illegal or ruthless schemes in the background. That would have added some real tension!Unrealistic romance:The fact that Rania, the richest and most beautiful girl in the entire college, chases after a nobody who constantly rejects her rudely and yells at her—almost like a stalker—is psychologically and socially completely unrealistic.All in all: The underlying idea definitely has potential, but the execution just wasn't for me due to the many plot holes, the illogical behavior of the company, and the artificial dialogue. I hope this honest perspective helps you with your future projects!"
