Inkitt
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Good storyline

"The book is captive and the writing style is very good "

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Review

"Good writing, good twists in the story, looking forward to more and can't wait for Ollie to finally get to show what she can do. ANNA MUST FIND OUT HER FRIEND AND DAUGHTERS are alive and in her pack"

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To many filter chapters

"The writing style and plot are good however, 5 chapters for one day is crazy. Boring filler chapters does not equate to a slow burn. I found myself skipping through chapters A LOT because it was just filler dribble that played no real part to the story as a whole."

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