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"This was definitely a good read with some good character development! Was a little lost at times due to some redundant details and some scenes dragged on a bit too much. The story was enjoyable!"
I loved the way you wrote the characters. I also love the fact that we had no idea Linda and Casey were dead until chapter 9. Their deaths made me sad. I also love the fact that you didn't fall for the happy ending trope where Katie mysteriously comes to life. Though I disliked that there were some places where the pacing sort of slowed down a bit too much, and there were some parts I had to skip past because I thought there was too much information. Very good plot though, I enjoyed it. I'd recommend this to people who love fantasy type novels. Id give this a 4star rating. Very enjoyable to read.
"I loved the way you wrote the characters. I also love the fact that we had no idea Linda and Casey were dead until chapter 9. Their deaths made me sad. I also love the fact that you didn't fall for the happy ending thing where Katie somehow mysteriously survives. Overall, this story had a good plot and good writing. I'd give it 4 stars, and greatly recommend for people who love fantasy stories."
