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Haunted House

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Summary

Chapter 1: The family moves into a beautiful, cheap brick house, completely unaware that a dark shadow silhouette is watching sixteen-year-old Zach from his bedroom window. Chapter 2: A playful game of hide-and-seek turns terrifying when Zach gets a text from his brother outside, right as a supernatural third clap echoes from his closet. Chapter 3: The entity mimics the mother’s voice through the baby monitor while baby Chelsea points to empty corners, giggling at a "big man laughing."

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Moving Day

The afternoon sun hit the large windows of the two-story house, making it look peaceful and welcoming. From the driveway, it looked like a dream come true. Jordan stretched his arms, smiling as he parked the moving truck, while Elena sat in the passenger seat, gently rocking little Chelsea to sleep in her arms.

“We are finally here,” Elena whispered, looking up at the beautiful brick walls.

From the back seat, Marcus was already unbuckling his seatbelt. At twenty years old, he was tall, athletic, and eager to flex his muscles by carrying the heaviest boxes inside. “I get the big room upstairs, no arguments!” he laughed, leaping out of the car.

Behind him came sixteen-year-old Zach. Zach adjusted his backpack and stared up at the house. On the outside, it was perfect. The grass was green, and the neighborhood was dead silent. But as Zach looked up at the second-floor window—the room that was supposed to be his new bedroom—he felt a sudden, ice-cold shiver run down his spine. It felt like someone, or something, was standing in the dark behind the glass, staring right down at him.

“You coming, Zach?” his dad, Jordan, called out, hoisting a massive wooden crate over his shoulder.

Zach blinked, and the strange feeling vanished. The window was just empty glass reflecting the blue sky. “Yeah, coming!” Zach called back, shaking his head. He smiled, trying to dismiss the weird vibe. It was just a new house. There was nothing to worry about.

The family spent the next six hours laughing, unpacking, and ordering pizza. By 10:00 PM, everyone was exhausted. Jordan and Elena went to bed downstairs, Marcus fell asleep instantly in his room, and baby Chelsea was snoring softly in her crib next door.

Zach turned off his bedroom lights, climbed into his new bed, and pulled up the blankets. The house was completely quiet. Zach closed his eyes, completely unaware that the trap was about to snap shut.

As the family unpacked the final boxes, Buster the dog trotted into Zach’s new bedroom, wagging his tail. But the moment he crossed the threshold, his tail dropped. Buster stopped dead in the center of the room. His ears perked up, his low growl vibrating through the floorboards as he stared intensely at the dark closet door.

“Hey, what’s wrong, boy?” Zach asked, kneeling down to pet him. Buster’s fur was standing on end.

Meanwhile, Mochi, the fluffy white cat, had hopped up onto Zach’s windowsill. Suddenly, her back arched violently. Her blue eyes dilated into huge black circles as she stared straight up at the ceiling, tracking something invisible moving slowly across the room. Zach looked up, but there was nothing there except the empty plaster.

By midnight, the house fell into a deep, heavy silence. Buster refused to sleep on his usual dog bed on the floor; instead, he whimpered and squeezed himself tightly against Zach’s legs on top of the mattress for protection. Mochi sat perfectly still at the foot of the bed, her eyes locked on the bedroom door, refusing to blink.

Zach sighed, rubbing his tired eyes. “You guys are freaking me out,” he muttered into the dark, pulling the blankets up to his chin. He finally closed his eyes, completely unaware that the trap was about to snap shut.

The Dinner Scene

Downstairs, the kitchen smelled like fresh, hot pizza and melted cheese.

“Come on Zach, let’s eat dinner!” Marcus yelled from the bottom of the stairs, his deep voice echoing through the new hallways. He was already sitting at the table, grabbing the biggest slice before anyone else could.

Zach shook off his creepy thoughts about the window and ran downstairs. Jordan was laughing, pouring juice for everyone, while Elena gently fed baby Chelsea in her high chair. Buster the dog sat right under Marcus’s chair, begging for crusts, while fluffy little Mochi curled up on a nearby cardboard box, purring contentedly. For an hour, everything felt completely normal. They were just a happy family in a beautiful new home.

But by midnight, the laughter stopped. The house fell into a deep, heavy freezing cold.

Bright morning sunlight poured into the kitchen the next day, but Zach felt like he hadn’t slept a single wink. He sat at the counter, pale and exhausted, staring blankly into his cereal bowl. Buster was sitting quietly under the table, still looking nervous, while fluffy little Mochi refused to leave the safety of the top shelf.

Marcus walked into the kitchen, grabbing an apple from the counter and noticing how exhausted his younger brother looked.

“Hey, are you okay? Looks like you didn’t like the house,” Marcus asked from Zach.

Zach sighed, rubbing his tired eyes. “No, the house is good, but Buster and Mochi act so weird. I don’t know what happened to them,” Zach replied, his voice shaking slightly as he remembered the shadow silhouette from 3:15 AM.

Marcus chuckled, patting Zach on the back with his heavy hand. “They are okay, Zach. Animals do things like that,” Marcus said, completely dismissing the danger. “They just need a few days to get used to the new smell of the place. Don’t stress about it.”

Marcus saw that Zach was still looking completely drained and stressed out. He wanted to shake his little brother out of his bad mood and make him laugh like they used to.

Marcus leaned in with a mischievous grin. “Let’s play hide and clap to make your mood better,” Marcus whispered, trying to keep his voice down so their parents wouldn’t hear.

Zach hesitated. The last thing he wanted to do was wander around this creepy house, but he didn’t want Marcus to think he was a coward. “Fine,” Zach muttered. “But I’m hiding first.”

“Deal. Count to thirty downstairs,” Marcus laughed, already sprinting up the wooden staircase to find a spot.

Zach closed his eyes at the bottom of the stairs and began to count. One... two... three...

As his voice echoed through the empty hallways, the bright morning sun outside suddenly felt distant. Upstairs, the temperature began to drop rapidly. Buster the dog sat at Zach’s feet, his ears flat against his head, staring straight up into the pitch-black shadows of the second-floor landing.

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