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Suspense

"This caught my attention right away. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story."

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Not His Bride

"I really enjoyed this novel.Drama, romance, suspense, all the good stuff."

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Take one wedding...toss in a bag of bees

"Not really, but the chaos that ensues when a woman is coerced into taking the place of another. The characters were believable, the setting and descriptive text beautifully written. I only had a bit of an issue with some of the plot elements, which had me confused in a "who did what now" manner. Thankfully, the author cleared it all up by the end. Overall, well done. "

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Not His Bride

"I liked this story. I am glad that Vivian found Leah and that Leah and Adrian fell in love. I am also glad that the whole story finally came out. I look forward to the book about what Vivian decides to do with herself. "

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Amazing

"Loved reading this book.. very well written "

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Good plot, excellent story, I'm enjoyingbit

"Good plot, love the story, fulnof suspense, characters well chosen. "

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Beautifully Written with Exciting Events

"I thoroughly enjoyed this novel! The author's writing style is incredibly immersive and keeps you hooked from the very first chapter. The plot is engaging and full of interesting events, though there were a few minor pacing issues, which is why I gave it 4 stars for the plot. I also noticed a few slight punctuation and grammar errors, but they don't take away from the overall enjoyable experience"

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Not his bride

"A little slow but getting there"

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